Finally someone who gives CONSTRUCTIVE criticism..
I agree, the lighting is messed a bit.
As for eliminating the logo, this was made for me not other people.
All work being made for others will be made specifically to how they want it.
If someone could tell me how to make your render show up very good, I wouldn't use so many lights, lol..I mean it is hard to see the actual image, so I use lights to make it show up better.
Only bad thing is, it causes major light spots that make it look unattractive..
Well, I thank you for your criticisms, and I got a laugh out of the "Under Construction" you made

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