Old concept, new style

CelestialBadger

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Original concept was to make a sig that would question an abortion argument in an indirect way. The sig ended up being kind of shitty though, so I just recently revisted the idea, trying to make it more graphic.

I'm not sure if this is complete. I don't know if I really like the composition or the color of the text. It feels like it should be centered, but I would have to move the leg to do that and I haven't gotten around to it yet. I also think that the text is too high contrast with the background. It draws the viewers' eyes to the text first instead of the picture. Let me know what you think though, and it people agree I'll probably end up changing it.

The end goal, once I'm satisfied, is a t-shirt transfer. The religious right loves me.
 

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Im not sure, I think its the text style that is calling its attention first. If it was only overlapping the picture a little, then it probably wouldnt make much of a difference. But, nice idea. Nicely done as well. Kinda curious as to how you did it.
 

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I dig it. It's easy and simple, yet so complicated at the same time.
 

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Why don't you like it?

And do you seriously not know what a fetus is...?
 

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The AK is a really nice touch. Is not the 2nd amendment the "right to bear arms"?

Funny.

I like.
 

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CelestialBadger said:
Why don't you like it?

And do you seriously not know what a fetus is...?
there is a crooked foot and maybe its just me but the colours seem bland
 
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