Evening Rain

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  1. sharksfin.gamer

    sharksfin.gamer T-Virus Mutation

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    I'd wanted to share a close friend of mine's poem that I found very beautiful, hope you guys enjoy it too! :D

    The evening rain
    falls to the ground
    erasing all
    the pain around

    Let me hear
    your silent cry
    Let me see
    the moonlit sky

    I want to fly
    I want to soar
    My life would end
    If I don't fall

    The evening rain,
    so sweet and pure
    it dries my soul
    cleansing me whole

    by Vincent Haoson
     
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    Galatia Retired Staff

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    Not bad, mr. sharksfin.gamer;)
     
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    sharksfin.gamer T-Virus Mutation

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    I would like to take credit of the comment, but it'd be rude if I did hehe, the poem was made by a very good friend of mine in the Phils. Vincent Haoson (as ssen in the byline :D)

    Thanks for reading it! :D