You threw off the meter in the last line too! Completely caught me off guard! Whew...I'm going to need a minute to get my nerves back together. 7/10 A poem about writing poems...Hmmm...Kind of abstract, but I'd say a little bit cliche as well. Unneeded, I think, is the bit about "Hot Topic". It only confuses your meter and it seems unnecessary to say where you bought the book from. Unless you were looking for "street creds" or the like by saying that you shop at Hot Topic. But still, I think overall it turned out okay. The first line really captures your yearning for the poem book quite well. Perhaps it's a metaphor for love?