2 New Abstracts

[Overtone]

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/overtone/Electro-Distruption.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/overtone/Digital_Chaos.jpg

What do you guys think?

 

[Beer $lut]

I like the lighting you did and everything but the abstracts dont cut it. 5/10

 

[Arkillo]

Abstracts were so last month. They look pretty choppy and unfinished also

 

[Ntrik_]

Originally posted by Jake Jeckel
Abstracts were so last month. They look pretty choppy and unfinished also

But I like your sig overtone.. they > rest of the work youve posted in this thread.

6/10 on those abstracts... way too choppy.

 

[Overtone]

Yeah, they are choppy. They anti-aliased terribly =/

 

[UnforgivinAngel]

firt one is to blocky and the wave beams are to hard (use lower flow)

second is same thing and the beam from the center looks crooked. needs to come straight out of it. (try playing with the free form on the beam layer)

other then that they are potentionaly good.