Chicken Soup for the emos soul

[PANDA]

Voices screaming in my head.
I love to cut, and drink the bloods from my wrists.
I make scars on my wrists, and i have some on my ankles.
My old girlfriend was so fat she had kankles.
And now i leave this miserable world
Thinking about how worthless much of skin i am today.
Hopefully ill wake up one day and this will all be a dream.
until that day i must lie down.
Hopefully shell come back around















:hxc

 

[RoaCh of DisCord]

Not emo enough. Plus, emos don't drink blood..that's goth.

 

[PANDA]

Sorry.....It's like my first day being emo its kind of hard!

 

[Darkmatter]

Ya, Emo's write poetry with their blood. :rofl2

 

[Emperor Pan I]

You're not emo. Stop trying.

 

[Darkmatter]

Mike is emo definately.

 

[Emperor Pan I]

Mike is emo definately.

I'm not emo, and neither is Darkrain

 

[Darkmatter]

Your names Mike? Thanks for telling me.

 

[Teh_Pwner]

DM is emo just look at his sig and avatar.

 

[Darkmatter]

Soooooooooo emo man...could be worse though.

 

[Nitemare.]

"My old girlfriend was so fat she had kankles."

Priceless.
Lols.​

 

[ChrisH36]

Not emo enough. Plus, emos don't drink blood..that's goth.

Yeah, but he is drinking the blood from his slit wrists.

 

[Darkmatter]

I think thats more vampire then emo...

 

[ChrisH36]

Vampire sucks blood from the neck and spreads its vamparism to other people.

 

[Darkmatter]

Sucking blood in general is a vampire tendency.

 

[ChrisH36]

But as an added side-effect, the blood of thier victims becomes polluted, then they become vampires themselves. Unless thier blood is purified or the vampire that bit them is not destroyed, they will continue to bear the curse.

Henceforth, vamparism.

LOL!

 

[Darkmatter]

Like I said, vampire tendencies. Emo nothing.

 

[Dream_Walker]

Sometimes when I am bleeding I drink my own blood. Am I a vampire?

 

[ChrisH36]

Not if you suck it from the neck.

Goths are more blood eaty or cannabalists.

 

[Arxces]

And just to experiment with different styles, I improv-d an emo poem. Honestly, please do not criticise too harshly, as I'm not an emo.

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A dark raven night
Overcomes me
As I am cornered to the wall
In a darkened room
Only moonlight through the window shines
A darkened room
As dark as the depths of my soul
And the wounds of my heart
A pain greater than
This deep cut that
Has dripped
But forms a pool around the blade
A scarlet red but
Dark against the moonlight
And mixed with the tears
From the depths of my anguish
My sorrow overcomes me
As I see the glint
Of a silver blade
Pondering it's taste upon my flesh
And my escape from
This unbearable sorrow

Why did she leave me?
I am afraid
I will never know
Would that she knew how I felt
And the devastation she caused
As she left me
In this dark pit
The very bottom of despair
Would that she felt me
And this endless torment
That is much greater
Than the pain of my cuts
I wish for it
To end

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Any comments? This is my first foray as a poet into the emo styles. I would appreciate any constructive feedback.
(Note: This is my 100th post. Very curious way of spending the 100th post, don't you think?)