What do you think of this poem?

Ignus

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Life Doesn’t Wait for Anyone.

It may be a cold day,
But it doesn’t stop the sun from shining.
The walls may have few windows,
But the light remains bright on us.

The Ferris wheel is ready to go,
But the handle needs to be pulled.
People are waiting,
So pull the handle silly.

Life is a bitch in many ways,
But there are great aspects to it.
Great opportunities rarely come by,
So grab them while you can.

Everyone is getting on the ride,
Wont you join me?
I’ll hold you tight to me,
So you cant fly away.
-Me-
 

RoaCh of DisCord

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Lawlz, it's good. Nice flow.

Wrong section, though.

~Moved.
 

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I wanted more people to make comments on it. :(
 
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