War's Gates

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  1. Chime

    Chime BattleForums Junior Member

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    A story I wrote. Yes I will continue it later, but right now I could only write this. When the chapter is finished I will write some extra things to help people understand what everything unfamiliar in the story means. Right now there is only a chapter one.
     

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    Finished. Took shorter than I expected. But I'm done these for now.
     

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    i wasn't expecting that ending
     
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    Which one?
     
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    I'm done this chapter.
     

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    I may... Aw heck,I WILL make a second one, but this is the end of War's gates for now.
     

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    i love it
     
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    Second book. First chapter. This one is again in medieval times and it is about a farmer.
     
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    you should become a book writer
     
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    Only one flaw, the chapters are extremely short. Though I have a plan to make them longer...