This is a story I wrote as a special school project when I was in year 9. This is not the final version because I have it on another copmuter which I cannot acces atm. I hope you like or can even be bothered reading it...
VISIONS OF FIRE
A book by the Author
The first instalment in the ‘Fire and Ice’ Series
“This dazzling book is a quantum leap in the evolution of the Fantasy genreâ€
Author
CONTENTS (there were page numbers here)
Prologue Tomorrow, When the World Began
Chapter 1 An Uncanny Resemblance
Chapter 2 Flaming Hell
Chapter 3 Calm Before the Storm
Chapter 4 Crystal Heaven
Chapter 5 Hive Inferno
Chapter 6 Nowhere to be Seen
Chapter 7 A Cloudless Sky
Prologue: Tomorrow, When the World Began
Chapter 1
An Uncanny Resemblance
16 Velstrom, 14074 SE (Saros El’kandor – After C reation)
The wet spring mist was beginning to clear as Kelkharn Uruldor rose from his morning relaxation in the pool of Eternity. His long silver hair gleamed in the golden sunlight as he dressed in the traditional blue Skevaran robe and strode towards his home. On his way he took time to admire the unearthly beauty of the last Terrevish sanctuary. Enormous stone towers loomed overhead, some standing taller than even the great oaks of Uldania. Each tower bore a family crest over its huge pine door. The crests were elaborately decorated with animals and tools representing the beliefs and characteristics of the family within.
The grass paths were filled with joyful children playing games observed carefully by elderly men and women. Kelkharn loved everything about Skevarus; from the infamously majestic architecture right down to the soft evergreen grass. It was all unbelievably perfect. But there was one thing about Skevarus that Kelkharn loved more than the ******d beauty. The people. Every Skevaran citizen was kind and gentle-spirited, and rarely did a soul freely commit an act against another Skevaran inhabitant.
There were still those who took the freedom and protection granted by the all-powerful Skevaran trieldars. These individual spoke out publicly against their ‘imprisonment’ and were swiftly exiled for treason. Terreves exiled from the transcendent Skevaran community were hit bluntly with the bleak reality of the outside world and often regretted their previous discontentment.
Every man and woman Kelkharn passed gave him a warm smile and a friendly greeting which he returned each with energetic vigour. He admired the wisdom of his elders and offered a polite bow to these worthy people. Everyone in the huge yet secluded Skevaran community knew each other by name and treated others not by rank but age. He had missed the welcoming homeliness of his home city during his dangerous travels to the wild northern woods.
As Kelkharn approached his family tower his younger sister Silvis ran eagerly out to meet him. His personal tutor Melchanur was striding briskly behind her with a harsh look on his aged face.
“Kelkharn! Finally you return from your travels in the north,†Silvis beamed, throwing herself lovingly at her brother.
“I missed you dearly sister.†replied Kelkharn, embracing Silvis gently.
“How was your journey back?†Silvis queried, her face still wearing a dumb grin.
“Ahem.†came the gruff voice of Melchanur, “If you are quite finished with your greetings, young master Uruldor has much study to catch up with.â€
“Sorry sir.†Silvis said curtly and ran back into the tower, her face shining with joy.
“So,†continued Melchanur “How was your journey?â€
“You haven’t changed a bit my friend,†Kelkharn observed “You’re as stubborn as you ever were.â€
“Let us enter.†Offered Melchanur warmly.
Kelkharn pushed the grand pine door inward to reveal a tidy, spacious living area, lined with exquisite artefacts from distant lands. When he entered he noticed several of the ceremonial weapons were missing from the wall facing him. His father, Ilnur Uruldor emerged from the door leading to the drawing room.
“Ah, you have grown so much since I last saw you, boy.†Ilnur observed.
“His mind has much work to do to keep up,†stated Melchanur, hurrying Kelkharn into the library.
“Quite rightly so.†Agreed Ilnur as he strode away down one of the countless corridors zigzagging around the structure.
Melchanur seated himself at the head of the large central desk and indicated for Kelkharn to sit to his right.
“Today we will begin with Kai-Ranu, the ancient Terrevish art of healing used in Skevarus for hundreds of generations.†Melchanur began; opening a book entitled ‘The War of Souls’ by Reldai Guros.
Melchanur read from the third chapter, “Before attempting Kai-Ranu, one must reach a state of inner peace. Most Terreves acquire this peace within seconds, other races may require up to an hour.â€
He continued with a well-known passage, and Kelkharn recited it with him, “You then must concentrate on channelling all your energy and life force into the target, breaking this link may result in lost memory and strength and weariness for either you or the target.â€
“It also bears a warning:†Melchanur went on, “DO NOT attempt more than once in a day. Your body needs time to regenerate its life force.â€
Melchanur swung his arm towards Kelkharn’s face, dealing a solid blow to his temple. Kelkharn was stunned and fell to the ground silently, still conscious. Melchanur knelt down beside Kelkharn and laid his hands upon his bruised head. Melchanur then proceeded to do as the book commanded and concentrated hard on channelling his peaceful energy into Kelkharn’s body. Kelkharn gradually reopened his eyes and his head began feeling better and better. Eventually, after several minutes, Kelkharn sat up and rubbed his head.
“It feels as it did before!†Kelkharn yelled in surprise.
After several hours of studying Kai-Ranu, Kelkharn proceeded up the wide spiral staircase which travelled up the centre of the family tower. He ascended three floors before reaching his bedroom. Kelkharn loved collecting anything old, his grand oak four-poster was hand crafted over a century ago by one of the greatest Terrevish carpenters ever. His room was littered with artefacts from far and wide. Kelkharn removed his robe and slipped gently under the soft, silk covers and drifted wearily into deep sleep.
<I HAD ANOTHER PARAGRAPH HERE BUT I LOST IT>
Kelkharn awoke suddenly, sweating profusely. His covers lay in a heap beside the bed. It was the same dream he had been having for months now. The same situation over and over again, and he could do nothing to stop it. He was helpless, unable to do anything. His body was covered in goose bumps yet as hot as the fires of the Abyss. He stood and moved over to a mug of traditional Terrevish Delvruin on his desk. He carried it over to the balcony and slowly sipped it. Admiring the dazzling beauty of Skevarus from high whilst pondering what the dream meant.
* * *
Thrust! Parry! Slash! Block!
Kelkharn put all his rapier duelling skills into action as his fighting prowess was pushed to its very limits.
He blocked a well-aimed swipe at his neck with his rapier and drew his dagger, swinging it around to slash at his opponent’s stomach. His dagger was expertly deflected, but he saw a vulnerable opening in his foes defences. Targeting the unprotected left shoulder, he thrust his rapier straight forward.
Moments before drawing blood, a silver flash in the corner of his peripheral vision distracted Kelkharn’s attention momentarily. In sudden realisation of what he saw, he wildly attempted to parry a blow aimed at his left thigh. His dagger fell in time to reduce the attack to a glancing cut. Suddenly the distraction had caused hi rapier to fly clear past its aim and continued on, throwing Kelkharn wildly off balance. He attempted to recover with a simple shoulder roll, but only managed to further bruise his thin Terrevish muscles.
“Very impressive master Uruldor,†observed Swordmaster Desron, one of many duelling instructors at the Skevaran Academy, “Obviously your visit to the forest elders was not completely useless. But you do need to work on your coordination – a proper Terrevish Blade Dancer should be able to know where both his weapons are, and his opponents’ weapons also. It is how they fight so impressively, even against innumerable odds.â€
“You certainly have learned much since I last faced you Kel,†agreed his duelling opponent, Turenar, 10 year Kelkharn’s senior.
“As have you, sir,†replied Kelkharn, showing the respect due to ones elders, “I have faced no opponent in the woods worthy of facing you in mortal combat, my friend, the Ilkar are so vastly inferior in weaponry and fighting skills that they would not stand a five minute fight with a Terreve.â€
“I do not know what you see in those brutes, master Uruldor,†mused the old Swordmaster, “They are no different from the common beasts of the wilderness.â€
“You would compare them with Targ and Suremms?†asked Kelkharn aggressively.
“The Ilkar are just like you or I, they can think, they have feelings, they can fight, they can…they…†Kelkharn trailed off, tears welling in his tired, bloodshot eyes, like crystal blue lakes long imprisoned and finally breaking free.
“I think you need more rest Kel,†decided Turenar as he began polishing his magical scimitar, a sword so powerful it was rumoured to have been forged in the fiery pits of the chaos abyss itself
Kelkharn carefully wound a bandage around his shoulder as he shuffled warily back towards his family tower. His eyes were burning with a fiery rage not commonly seen in Terreves, but a common trait of Gurans and Avalen. He had another attribute very uncommon to his kind, compassion for other races as equals. Most Terreves have a strong belief of racial superiority and bear a great contempt for other beings. In Kelkharn’s case, though, this was very different.
[to be continued...]
VISIONS OF FIRE
A book by the Author
The first instalment in the ‘Fire and Ice’ Series
“This dazzling book is a quantum leap in the evolution of the Fantasy genreâ€
Author
CONTENTS (there were page numbers here)
Prologue Tomorrow, When the World Began
Chapter 1 An Uncanny Resemblance
Chapter 2 Flaming Hell
Chapter 3 Calm Before the Storm
Chapter 4 Crystal Heaven
Chapter 5 Hive Inferno
Chapter 6 Nowhere to be Seen
Chapter 7 A Cloudless Sky
Prologue: Tomorrow, When the World Began
Chapter 1
An Uncanny Resemblance
16 Velstrom, 14074 SE (Saros El’kandor – After C reation)
The wet spring mist was beginning to clear as Kelkharn Uruldor rose from his morning relaxation in the pool of Eternity. His long silver hair gleamed in the golden sunlight as he dressed in the traditional blue Skevaran robe and strode towards his home. On his way he took time to admire the unearthly beauty of the last Terrevish sanctuary. Enormous stone towers loomed overhead, some standing taller than even the great oaks of Uldania. Each tower bore a family crest over its huge pine door. The crests were elaborately decorated with animals and tools representing the beliefs and characteristics of the family within.
The grass paths were filled with joyful children playing games observed carefully by elderly men and women. Kelkharn loved everything about Skevarus; from the infamously majestic architecture right down to the soft evergreen grass. It was all unbelievably perfect. But there was one thing about Skevarus that Kelkharn loved more than the ******d beauty. The people. Every Skevaran citizen was kind and gentle-spirited, and rarely did a soul freely commit an act against another Skevaran inhabitant.
There were still those who took the freedom and protection granted by the all-powerful Skevaran trieldars. These individual spoke out publicly against their ‘imprisonment’ and were swiftly exiled for treason. Terreves exiled from the transcendent Skevaran community were hit bluntly with the bleak reality of the outside world and often regretted their previous discontentment.
Every man and woman Kelkharn passed gave him a warm smile and a friendly greeting which he returned each with energetic vigour. He admired the wisdom of his elders and offered a polite bow to these worthy people. Everyone in the huge yet secluded Skevaran community knew each other by name and treated others not by rank but age. He had missed the welcoming homeliness of his home city during his dangerous travels to the wild northern woods.
As Kelkharn approached his family tower his younger sister Silvis ran eagerly out to meet him. His personal tutor Melchanur was striding briskly behind her with a harsh look on his aged face.
“Kelkharn! Finally you return from your travels in the north,†Silvis beamed, throwing herself lovingly at her brother.
“I missed you dearly sister.†replied Kelkharn, embracing Silvis gently.
“How was your journey back?†Silvis queried, her face still wearing a dumb grin.
“Ahem.†came the gruff voice of Melchanur, “If you are quite finished with your greetings, young master Uruldor has much study to catch up with.â€
“Sorry sir.†Silvis said curtly and ran back into the tower, her face shining with joy.
“So,†continued Melchanur “How was your journey?â€
“You haven’t changed a bit my friend,†Kelkharn observed “You’re as stubborn as you ever were.â€
“Let us enter.†Offered Melchanur warmly.
Kelkharn pushed the grand pine door inward to reveal a tidy, spacious living area, lined with exquisite artefacts from distant lands. When he entered he noticed several of the ceremonial weapons were missing from the wall facing him. His father, Ilnur Uruldor emerged from the door leading to the drawing room.
“Ah, you have grown so much since I last saw you, boy.†Ilnur observed.
“His mind has much work to do to keep up,†stated Melchanur, hurrying Kelkharn into the library.
“Quite rightly so.†Agreed Ilnur as he strode away down one of the countless corridors zigzagging around the structure.
Melchanur seated himself at the head of the large central desk and indicated for Kelkharn to sit to his right.
“Today we will begin with Kai-Ranu, the ancient Terrevish art of healing used in Skevarus for hundreds of generations.†Melchanur began; opening a book entitled ‘The War of Souls’ by Reldai Guros.
Melchanur read from the third chapter, “Before attempting Kai-Ranu, one must reach a state of inner peace. Most Terreves acquire this peace within seconds, other races may require up to an hour.â€
He continued with a well-known passage, and Kelkharn recited it with him, “You then must concentrate on channelling all your energy and life force into the target, breaking this link may result in lost memory and strength and weariness for either you or the target.â€
“It also bears a warning:†Melchanur went on, “DO NOT attempt more than once in a day. Your body needs time to regenerate its life force.â€
Melchanur swung his arm towards Kelkharn’s face, dealing a solid blow to his temple. Kelkharn was stunned and fell to the ground silently, still conscious. Melchanur knelt down beside Kelkharn and laid his hands upon his bruised head. Melchanur then proceeded to do as the book commanded and concentrated hard on channelling his peaceful energy into Kelkharn’s body. Kelkharn gradually reopened his eyes and his head began feeling better and better. Eventually, after several minutes, Kelkharn sat up and rubbed his head.
“It feels as it did before!†Kelkharn yelled in surprise.
After several hours of studying Kai-Ranu, Kelkharn proceeded up the wide spiral staircase which travelled up the centre of the family tower. He ascended three floors before reaching his bedroom. Kelkharn loved collecting anything old, his grand oak four-poster was hand crafted over a century ago by one of the greatest Terrevish carpenters ever. His room was littered with artefacts from far and wide. Kelkharn removed his robe and slipped gently under the soft, silk covers and drifted wearily into deep sleep.
<I HAD ANOTHER PARAGRAPH HERE BUT I LOST IT>
Kelkharn awoke suddenly, sweating profusely. His covers lay in a heap beside the bed. It was the same dream he had been having for months now. The same situation over and over again, and he could do nothing to stop it. He was helpless, unable to do anything. His body was covered in goose bumps yet as hot as the fires of the Abyss. He stood and moved over to a mug of traditional Terrevish Delvruin on his desk. He carried it over to the balcony and slowly sipped it. Admiring the dazzling beauty of Skevarus from high whilst pondering what the dream meant.
* * *
Thrust! Parry! Slash! Block!
Kelkharn put all his rapier duelling skills into action as his fighting prowess was pushed to its very limits.
He blocked a well-aimed swipe at his neck with his rapier and drew his dagger, swinging it around to slash at his opponent’s stomach. His dagger was expertly deflected, but he saw a vulnerable opening in his foes defences. Targeting the unprotected left shoulder, he thrust his rapier straight forward.
Moments before drawing blood, a silver flash in the corner of his peripheral vision distracted Kelkharn’s attention momentarily. In sudden realisation of what he saw, he wildly attempted to parry a blow aimed at his left thigh. His dagger fell in time to reduce the attack to a glancing cut. Suddenly the distraction had caused hi rapier to fly clear past its aim and continued on, throwing Kelkharn wildly off balance. He attempted to recover with a simple shoulder roll, but only managed to further bruise his thin Terrevish muscles.
“Very impressive master Uruldor,†observed Swordmaster Desron, one of many duelling instructors at the Skevaran Academy, “Obviously your visit to the forest elders was not completely useless. But you do need to work on your coordination – a proper Terrevish Blade Dancer should be able to know where both his weapons are, and his opponents’ weapons also. It is how they fight so impressively, even against innumerable odds.â€
“You certainly have learned much since I last faced you Kel,†agreed his duelling opponent, Turenar, 10 year Kelkharn’s senior.
“As have you, sir,†replied Kelkharn, showing the respect due to ones elders, “I have faced no opponent in the woods worthy of facing you in mortal combat, my friend, the Ilkar are so vastly inferior in weaponry and fighting skills that they would not stand a five minute fight with a Terreve.â€
“I do not know what you see in those brutes, master Uruldor,†mused the old Swordmaster, “They are no different from the common beasts of the wilderness.â€
“You would compare them with Targ and Suremms?†asked Kelkharn aggressively.
“The Ilkar are just like you or I, they can think, they have feelings, they can fight, they can…they…†Kelkharn trailed off, tears welling in his tired, bloodshot eyes, like crystal blue lakes long imprisoned and finally breaking free.
“I think you need more rest Kel,†decided Turenar as he began polishing his magical scimitar, a sword so powerful it was rumoured to have been forged in the fiery pits of the chaos abyss itself
Kelkharn carefully wound a bandage around his shoulder as he shuffled warily back towards his family tower. His eyes were burning with a fiery rage not commonly seen in Terreves, but a common trait of Gurans and Avalen. He had another attribute very uncommon to his kind, compassion for other races as equals. Most Terreves have a strong belief of racial superiority and bear a great contempt for other beings. In Kelkharn’s case, though, this was very different.
[to be continued...]