Starcraft story (help me out a lil)

[TrongaMonga]

another thing Ryan, PM smashbrothers first ur stuff so it wont be away from the stroy, like that worm thing u did and my post after that one

 

[RyanXWing]

Yea I know the worm... But I have PMed Smash but didn't get a response

 

[TrongaMonga]

well, u gotta wait, what ca i say

 

[SmashBros.Pro]

Originally posted by RyanXWing
Yea I know the worm... But I have PMed Smash but didn't get a response

I got your PM and read it, but I couldn't reply because I was late for the Basketball game. I don't like the worm idea for Zerg, but it could be a neutral unit instead of Zerg having a superpower unit. Also about the stuff Fade did with the teleportation; I would like to note something so everyone won't get carried away with it.

I thought hard about it and I concluded that other units would have the ability, but not just any plain unit. They would have to train for 2 months to learn the power and it can't just be casted. It requires concentration which takes time to perform, Fade is a slight exception, he is able to perform "concentration magic" on a higher level, but like others, it requires him to concentrate before he can do it. The time of concentration varies with the power of the spell.

I would also appreciate it if you sent me and Cortalos a copy of what you would like to post before you do so, so that way we can decide whether or not it shold be posted. The reason where doing this is because of a certain person named ShrimpShark who "tried" to add-on stuff without permission, the stuff he added just plain out sucked and through the story way out in nowhere. All I'm asking is that you get permission from me or Cortalos before you add anything on. Thanks ahead of time to all who follow those few easy rules.

I'd like to add something else, I'm not trying to control everything that contributes to this story and it's not completly mine. Cortalos has contributed greatly to the story and it s just as much his as it is mine.

 

[RyanXWing]

OK well the worm is dead so everyone can be happy

 

[TrongaMonga]

naw its ur story cortalos sucks u rock jk

 

[RyanXWing]

Next Part needs to be very good...I think

 

[RyanXWing]

Please tell me its not going to just stop like this

 

[TrongaMonga]

im out of time now, but im trying to make a new chapter

 

[RyanXWing]

Awesome, next time you have time, well you will do what you need to

 

[TrongaMonga]

unfortunately, it will take time to me to have time... onyl in about 2 weeks or more, but I'll try

 

[RyanXWing]

Its better than not getting a chance at all

 

[dl-ToxicViper]

this is a pretty sweet story....can't believe you guys stopped though....damn

 

[TrongaMonga]

u can continue, just PM smashbroters with the rest... im out of inspiration and time lately

 

[trollwarlord2]

neat story , but watch out over there buddy , dont make thoze evil zerg too poxerfull
-why dont ya use insects from our planet , give em some tentacles , make em a feet or 20 tall , u get my point

-ps : u shoud makje a book out of this

-edit : o right..... starcraft has copyright on anything related to em so your book will be flamed as hell

-another edit : too bad

 

[TrongaMonga]

Damn it, you had to bump this very particular thread?

I have to close it now, has you used some weird strain of spam...

I've done so much double posting here

 

[coRtALoS]

NEVER!!!

Why close it? Maybe someone in the far far distant future of BF will wanna resume where we left off when Smash and I are long gone.

 

[DigitalElite]

IM confused, why arent you and Smash continuing the story??

 

[Wing Zero]

b/c they have no free time?

 

[RexyRex[HA]]

This is a VERY nice story. I hope someday SmashBros you become a famous writer becuase you definatley have the talent...Wow, this is such a good story...