Starcraft story (help me out a lil)

Discussion in 'StarCraft: Brood War' started by SmashBros.Pro, Sep 24, 2002.

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Hows it looking so far?

  1. Awesome

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    32.2%
  2. Good

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    18.6%
  3. Average

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  4. Needs Improvement

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  5. Sucks

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    6.8%
  6. I Have No Idea Cuz Im Too Lazy To Read It

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  1. TrongaMonga

    TrongaMonga Grumpy Old Grandpa

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    another thing Ryan, PM smashbrothers first ur stuff so it wont be away from the stroy, like that worm thing u did and my post after that one
     
  2. RyanXWing

    RyanXWing Nothing special

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    Yea I know the worm... But I have PMed Smash but didn't get a response
     
  3. TrongaMonga

    TrongaMonga Grumpy Old Grandpa

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    well, u gotta wait, what ca i say
     
  4. SmashBros.Pro

    SmashBros.Pro BattleForums Senior Member

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    I got your PM and read it, but I couldn't reply because I was late for the Basketball game. I don't like the worm idea for Zerg, but it could be a neutral unit instead of Zerg having a superpower unit. Also about the stuff Fade did with the teleportation; I would like to note something so everyone won't get carried away with it.

    I thought hard about it and I concluded that other units would have the ability, but not just any plain unit. They would have to train for 2 months to learn the power and it can't just be casted. It requires concentration which takes time to perform, Fade is a slight exception, he is able to perform "concentration magic" on a higher level, but like others, it requires him to concentrate before he can do it. The time of concentration varies with the power of the spell.

    I would also appreciate it if you sent me and Cortalos a copy of what you would like to post before you do so, so that way we can decide whether or not it shold be posted. The reason where doing this is because of a certain person named ShrimpShark who "tried" to add-on stuff without permission, the stuff he added just plain out sucked and through the story way out in nowhere. All I'm asking is that you get permission from me or Cortalos before you add anything on. Thanks ahead of time to all who follow those few easy rules.

    I'd like to add something else, I'm not trying to control everything that contributes to this story and it's not completly mine. Cortalos has contributed greatly to the story and it s just as much his as it is mine.
     
  5. RyanXWing

    RyanXWing Nothing special

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    OK well the worm is dead so everyone can be happy
     
  6. TrongaMonga

    TrongaMonga Grumpy Old Grandpa

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    naw its ur story cortalos sucks u rock :p jk
     
  7. RyanXWing

    RyanXWing Nothing special

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    Next Part needs to be very good...I think
     
  8. RyanXWing

    RyanXWing Nothing special

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    Please tell me its not going to just stop like this
     
  9. TrongaMonga

    TrongaMonga Grumpy Old Grandpa

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    im out of time now, but im trying to make a new chapter
     
  10. RyanXWing

    RyanXWing Nothing special

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    Awesome, next time you have time, well you will do what you need to
     
  11. TrongaMonga

    TrongaMonga Grumpy Old Grandpa

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    unfortunately, it will take time to me to have time... onyl in about 2 weeks or more, but I'll try
     
  12. RyanXWing

    RyanXWing Nothing special

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    Its better than not getting a chance at all
     
  13. dl-ToxicViper

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    this is a pretty sweet story....can't believe you guys stopped though....damn
     
  14. TrongaMonga

    TrongaMonga Grumpy Old Grandpa

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    u can continue, just PM smashbroters with the rest... im out of inspiration and time lately
     
  15. trollwarlord2

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    neat story , but watch out over there buddy , dont make thoze evil zerg too poxerfull
    -why dont ya use insects from our planet , give em some tentacles , make em a feet or 20 tall , u get my point

    -ps : u shoud makje a book out of this

    -edit : o right..... starcraft has copyright on anything related to em so your book will be flamed as hell

    -another edit : too bad
     
  16. TrongaMonga

    TrongaMonga Grumpy Old Grandpa

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    Damn it, you had to bump this very particular thread?

    I have to close it now, has you used some weird strain of spam...

    I've done so much double posting here :)
     
  17. coRtALoS

    coRtALoS -=[ Retired BF Admin ]=-

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    NEVER!!!

    Why close it? Maybe someone in the far far distant future of BF will wanna resume where we left off when Smash and I are long gone. :)
     
  18. DigitalElite

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    IM confused, why arent you and Smash continuing the story??
     
  19. Wing Zero

    Wing Zero lol just as planned

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    b/c they have no free time?
     
  20. RexyRex[HA]

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    This is a VERY nice story. I hope someday SmashBros you become a famous writer becuase you definatley have the talent...Wow, this is such a good story...