Help ME Out A Lil.... I'm currently in the process of writing a StarCraft story and I want a judgement on how it's lookin so far. Also Im not planning on selling this to Blizzard, unless they want it and all that other stuff so don't comment Blizzard won't like it. Also I need a title, but I'm only about 4% done with it and i wont post anything else, related ot my story. I'm not even sure if this is in the right Forum. It's the year 2455 AD, life for the Terran was getting worse as the days past. The planet the Terran, Earth II, is becoming more and more un-inhabitable because of the chemical and bio-tech weapons the planet was producing. As all hope seen lost for he Terran race the Commander Zaren gets word of a new uninhabited planet. "Commander we have just recieved word that there is an uninhabited planet in Galaxy 423 that we could terraform" said Private Geana. The Commander immediatly sent word to President Aron. "Sir we have just gotten word that there is a planet that we could definatly terraform in Galaxy 43" said the Commander, not reliazing he had made a mistake on the galaxy's location. "Well" said Aron, "I wan't you to set an outpost on the planet and I will send you men after you have confirmed there is no life on the planet. The President signed paperwork allowing Commander to take 10 of the best men on the planet with him in case of an emergency. President Aron gives Zaren a folder with 10 soldiers that each specialized in one job. "Go now and gather these men and report back when you do so" said Aron, "Yes Sir!" said Zaren, then he turned and walked out the door.