Starcraft: Mengsk's revenge! (Sequel to "Legend of the unbuilt supply depot".

Abominable Pamma

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Since Arcturus Mengsk's base had been r0xxed by Jim Raynor, he had to rebuild his base on Tarsonis, one of the few planets that had not yet been scorched by the high flying protoss. It had been 3 years since he had faced Raynor, andhe was anxious to overpower the rebel. Mengsk had been warned by one of his scouts that Raynor was coming for a "Tea Party".

Raynor pulled his men back, just out of sight of the Sons Of Korhals Missile Turrets. Raynor lobbed grenades at the turrets and easily burned them to the ground. A Trio of wraiths laed waste to several science vessels, and other air units. Why is he taking out my detectors, though arcturus? Then he saw it. Raynor has an Arbitor and many burrowed Zerglings. What the hell was he doing? The arbiter was patrolling back and force, the zerglings just in range of the cloaking field. Then the earth exploded, and out came...nothing. Nothing was there in the unburrowing wake. What the hell?

In jsut a few minutes, Mengsk was being raided by invisible beings. What could it be, the arbitor is gone! Without available detectors, he could not find the source of destruction. Mengsk then thought...No! Damn you Raynor!

Mengsk radioed Raynor, and yelled "OMG YuO fuxx0ring n00b frickin cloakin your lings that is teh cheapies!" "OmG mensk just because you cant make detectors and i am roxx0ring your base!1" "0mg its cuz this map is uber ghey!1!1 i friggin ran outta gas!1!1 screw this i r reporting you to b.net! 111"

After Mengsk reported Raynor to b.net, his account was banend and his SC serial number was forever forgotten...




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Originally posted by Pamma
Since Arcturus Mengsk's base had been r0xxed by Jim Raynor.
r0xx0rred is teh ult!m@t3 w3rrd.

Originally posted by Pamma
Raynor was coming for a "Tea Party".
Hehehe :p

Originally posted by Pamma
Mengsk radioed Raynor, and yelled "OMG YuO fuxx0ring n00b frickin cloakin your lings that is teh cheapies!" "OmG mensk just because you cant make detectors and i am roxx0ring your base!1" "0mg its cuz this map is uber ghey!1!1 i friggin ran outta gas!1!1 screw this i r reporting you to b.net! 111"
Hahahahahahahahahahaha. ROFL. This is currently one of the best story's yet! :D
 

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ROFL. They say sequels suck but not this 1.
Whens the next one coming out?
 

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Story - 8/10 Yup, high rating here.
Originality - 9/10 I have to a agree with Renzo :D:
Mengsk radioed Raynor, and yelled "OMG YuO fuxx0ring n00b frickin cloakin your lings that is teh cheapies!" "OmG mensk just because you cant make detectors and i am roxx0ring your base!1" "0mg its cuz this map is uber ghey!1!1 i friggin ran outta gas!1!1 screw this i r reporting you to b.net! 111"
Style - 9/10 Very l33t terms of SC, not to mention that this is a different format of you Pamma.
Structure - 7/10 Story process could have been better.
Spelling/Grammer - 9/10
Overall - 9/10 This one scores it:
After Mengsk reported Raynor to b.net, his account was banend and his SC serial number was forever forgotten...
Short, unexpected, but yet funny and enjoyable for SC fans. :)

- Amantis
 

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haha u are telling the real things that are going under blizzard nose
 

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10/10. I'm typing while I'm ROFLing. So damn hard to type...
 

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10/10! when's the next sequel comin out?
 

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Some1 on Blizzforums ripped this story off!!!

Ah I'm so mad now !!!
OH and wat a great story11one1
 
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