Poetry: Darling Angel

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  1. RoaCh of DisCord

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    Here we are my darling angel,
    our love will everlast;
    All our troubles are now behind us,
    My anger is now the past

    I know we had our troubles baby,
    but that doesn't matter now;
    I wish you'd just forgive me...
    Please just tell me how

    So now you never speak to me,
    but maybe that's a sign;
    A sign that now your heart's at rest;
    laying next to mine

    I love to caress your pale white skin,
    comforting coldness to the touch;
    However I'm thinking it could be nice,
    if your body didn't mush

    I really never meant to hit you...
    The snap was oh so loud;
    I trembled in a sort of fear
    when your body hit the ground

    You smashed against the bedframe,
    before I layed you down
    but then I saw your tender smile;
    Baby you deserve a crown

    Now it's finally time my love,
    It's time we shared our vows
    So there is no more questions;
    No more un-needed "how's"

    I'll love you now and forever darling
    and even in your death
    "but I wish you would stop bleedin"
    I mumble under my breath
     
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    ****ing gawth.
     
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    mission ****ing accomplished :D
     
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    defineatly poetyrt.y
     
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    Nice poem. The way it's ambiguous about the 'other' is really enjoyable, in its own psycho way. You really get into the character and how (presumably) he thinks and his obsession...
     
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    >.> I'd tap that/10

    Necrophiliaaaaaaaaaa