My bigassthread for TBoAI; Nocturne

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  1. Arkillo

    Arkillo The best of both worlds

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    Characters, in order of appearance.

    Lady DB
    Lord DB
    Victor DB

    Alexander Belk
    Jace Belk
    Clara Belk
    Lord Eveline
    Rose Eveline

    Master Perek (Pal)
    Dalen/Dalen
    Erika/Erika
    Bandits
    Felix
    Melindora
    Lord Artemis

    Lady Consul
    Lady El
    Argus d'Arras
    Red Heat - Balakar
    Frostbite - Razade

    End char list.
     
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    Alexanders History; Book I

    I - His birth, death and abadonment.
    Lady DB death during labor
    Born with star shaped birthmark on shoulder
    Victor (15) decides to kill him for loss of mother (very attached to mom, dad hates it and says it makes him weak)
    Victor leave Alex outside in woods of The White City
    Victor returns and tells Lord DB about it, father says theres hope for him (victor) yet.
    Close with wolves circling the baby

    II - Adoption as a Belk
    Jace Belk finds him and scares off the wolves, taking him back to his house
    Clara Belk decides it's ok to keep him, names him Alexander (after Claras father)
    6th birthday, enters acadamy to be a Pal
    Rose and Lord Eveline are introduced, as well as Master Perek (leader)
    Alexander/Rose relationship forms (8)
    (12)Top of class at age 12
    Graduation top Pal, Rose top Cler
    Bottm Cler/Pal seek revenge on Rose/Alexander
    (13)Jace and Clara killed by Dalan and Erika
    Alexander seeks revenge
    Lord Eveline warns him that revenge would lead to expulsion from academy and city
    Close with Alexander quits and leaves, rather than be expelled

    III - Wilderness Years

    Living on his own, encounters same wolf pack
    Tames wolves, while training
    (14)Death of mother wolf, leaves the pack
    Discovers a hideout for outcasts of the city
    Erika and Dalen are spotted there, new colors.
    Killing of Erika and Dalen, taking Red Heat
    Group of bandits that live in hideout attack
    (15)Understanding how Red Heat works
    (16)Year of training with Red Heat, seeks more power

    IV - Return to the City
    Lord Eveline accepts him back in with open arms
    Meeting of Rose (15) and Alexander again, Rose with Felix (17)
    Clash between Alexander and Felix over Rose
    Melindora steps in
    (18) Melindora and Alex together
    Rose and Alexanders secret relationship
    (20)Top in class once again
    Felix and Alexander make ammends
    (21)Graduation day, now a fully fledged Pal (Rose(20) Cler, Mel(22) Dru, Felix(22) Sha
    Discussion of Alexander by the five lords

    V - Trials of the Belk


     
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    Alexanders History; Book I

    I - His birth, death and abadonment.
    Lady DB death during labor
    Born with star shaped birthmark on shoulder
    Victor (15) decides to kill him for loss of mother (very attached to mom, dad hates it and says it makes him weak)
    Victor leave Alex outside in woods of The White City
    Victor returns and tells Lord DB about it, father says theres hope for him (victor) yet.
    Close with wolves circling the baby

    II - Adoption as a Belk
    Jace Belk finds him and scares off the wolves, taking him back to his house
    Clara Belk decides it's ok to keep him, names him Alexander (after Claras father)
    6th birthday, enters acadamy to be a Pal
    Rose and Lord Eveline are introduced, as well as Master Perek (leader)
    Alexander/Rose relationship forms (8)
    (12)Top of class at age 12
    Graduation top Pal, Rose top Cler
    Bottm Cler/Pal seek revenge on Rose/Alexander
    (13)Jace and Clara killed by Dalan and Erika
    Alexander seeks revenge
    Lord Eveline warns him that revenge would lead to expulsion from academy and city
    Close with Alexander quits and leaves, rather than be expelled

    III - Wilderness Years

    Living on his own, encounters same wolf pack
    Tames wolves, while training
    (14)Death of mother wolf, leaves the pack
    Discovers a hideout for outcasts of the city
    Erika and Dalen are spotted there, new colors.
    Killing of Erika and Dalen, taking Red Heat
    Group of bandits that live in hideout attack
    (15)Understanding how Red Heat works
    (16)Year of training with Red Heat, seeks more power

    IV - Return to the City
    Lord Eveline accepts him back in with open arms
    Meeting of Rose (15) and Alexander again, Rose with Felix (17)
    Clash between Alexander and Felix over Rose
    Melindora steps in
    (18) Melindora and Alex together
    Rose and Alexanders secret relationship
    (20)Top in class once again
    Felix and Alexander make ammends
    (21)Graduation day, now a fully fledged Pal (Rose(20) Cler, Mel(22) Dru, Felix(22) Sha
    Discussion of Alexander by the five lords
    V - Trials of the Belk
    After Graduation returns home
    Finds Jace's work in locked room
    Letter to him from Jace
    Family broke rules of single spectrum
    Weapon he carries (assumed, as it was left to him) Red Heat is one of their heirlooms, granting him power of red.
    Necklace inside letter
    Binding for Frostbite
    Any weapon he puts it on gains Frostbites properties
    Wraps around his dagger, transforms into a blue frozen blade
    Removes it, wraps it around Red Heat
    Red Heat and Frostbite are sentient objects (symbiotes)
    Combined they pull him into their dimension
    Jace and Clara are there and they teach him how to use the weapons
    Special weapon properties brought on by symbioates
    Balakar (Red Heat) - Flame Shield, large fire toad
    Razade (Frostbite) - Frozen Touch, huge levithan creature​
    Falls into a catatonic state (while his mind is inside the elder-dimension learning how to use the weapons properly), Rose finds him​

    End Book 1
     
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    Gods and Symbiote Info

    Illandri - White - Tall / Stout -- Baelog's Twin(Middle 40's)
    Baelog - Black - Crippled / Weak -- Illandri's Twin
    Kaelos - Green - Muscular / One Handed -- Oldest(Middle 70s)
    Shrelok - Blue - Beautiful / Female -- Goremond's Twin (Young 20s)
    Goremond - Red - Smartest / Shortest -- Shrelok's Twin (Youngest)

    Eternalus - Reinken - White - Staff/Sword - Lord Eveline
    Nightblade - Valner - Black - User Consent - Richard/Victor/Alexander
    Hand Of Kaelos - Quel'Nos - Green - Claw - Felix
    Frostbite - Razade - Blue - Necklace - Jace/Alexander
    Red Heat - Balakar - Red - Sword - Clara/Alexander

    Reinken - Male angel, golden armor, long sword and shield
    Valner - Reaper, large shadow scythe
    Quel'nos - Wood nymph
    Razade - Huge levithan creature
    Balakar - Giant red toad

    Reinken can absorb light to charge the weilders abilities, allow them to use deadly armageddon types
    Valner can absrob the powers of those it slays, to an extent. No healing or white spells
    Quel'nos can transform it's weilder into a deathbeast, increasing the strength and speed for a limited time
    Balakar can surround it's weilder in flame, making him impervious to all damage for a short amount of time
    Razade can coat whatever it's bind to to where it will freeze upon touch.

    Reinken --> Balakar --> Quel'nos --> Razade --> Valner --> Reinken
     
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    Looks like you went through some time...

    Is this for School or an Rp type dealy?
     
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    Book I'm working on.
     
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    fuck all that, starting over.
     
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    A:I::S:I

    Thunder crackles in the background as a castle is shown, sillhoetted. Two male forms are fighting in an open field not far from the castle, one in black robes, one in dark red chain mail. The man in the black robes is easily overpowering the man in the red, as another bolt of lightning crackles.

    Snakelike voice:
    "Where are your gods now brother?"

    Man in black strikes Alexander to his knees, and removes his helmet, revealing Alexander's face.

    Alexander:
    "You won't get away with this, you will NOT win this war! You hear me, Victor?!"

    The man in black, revealed to be Victor:
    "It's a shame you put such faith in them. But you should know, they havn't abandoned you...They were never with you to begin with!"

    Alexander:
    "As long as I belive in them, they are wi-"

    Victor, cutting in:
    "Oh please, spare me your foolishness! From my standing, everything is clear. My "god", my resolve to rule, has conqoured all the 'gods' you believe in.

    Victor raises his sword to kill Alexander, as it starts to rain

    Victor, lookin shocked as he stops his attack on Alexander:
    "Rain? This is no good."

    Victor turns to see a large man clad in blue cloth, bloody and broken holding onto his left shoulder. The man is all bloodied, as his left hand is glowing a bight blue.

    Victor:
    "Argus?! How did you survive?"

    The large man, Argus, clenches his fist before Victor can finish his thought. Two large balls of water smash into Victor, slamming him to the ground, unconscious.

    Argus:
    "Alex, get up and get out of here. We'll catch up with you!"

    Alexander:
    "We? Who else survived?"

    Two figures appear from the shadows of a nearby watchtower. One female, Melindora, dressed in a green ceremonial dress and one male, Felix, dressed in a similar green ceremonial robe.

    Felix:
    "Argus can only hold him for a few more minutes, then it's up to us sis. You ready?"

    Melindora:
    "After what he did, I'll always be ready."

    Melindora's green eyes turn completely red as her voice growls.

    Argus:
    "Alexander! You are the only one of us that can kill him at this point, flee here so you can heal!"

    Victor, after regaining his composure from the attack, rushes over to Argus, stabbing him through the heart with his sword

    Victor:
    "YOU will be going NO WHERE, fool!"

    Melindora:
    "Our turn..."