Made this video - need feedback - bonus:girl has large knockers

[gamingwiz09]

so i made this video for a company. they wanted it offtopic, "grungy" and to feel like it belongs on youtube. it should feel more like a youtube clip and not like a commercial. i'm done with the rough cut and would love feedback.

thanks!

here it is: circuspop.com/adlandingpage.html

music isn't great but girl has nice boobs so should be fun to watch. appreciate the feedback! Company is circuspop, they sell stuff online in an auction-like way, but like i said, video is basically unrelated, which is what they asked for.