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09-13-2004, 01:44 AM
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| BattleForums Senior Member
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Honolulu, Hawaii Age: 20 Posts: 3,259
| If i was god
If i was god for just one day
I'd accomplish nothing for man kind.
Everything id do would be for myself.
I'd demolish all my problems
I'd fix everything wrong
But i wont give a **** about you.
If i was god for a day
Everything would stop hurting
My eyes, my face, my body.
All the wrongs would be right. | 
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09-13-2004, 02:54 AM
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| Comfortably Numb
Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Somewhere In Asia Posts: 1,303
| make starcraft 2 come out sooner | |
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09-13-2004, 04:09 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Russia, Moscow Age: 19 Posts: 3,161
| Akule, you got no rhyme in that poem. Although the concept is good. Or is it a blank poem?
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09-13-2004, 04:27 PM
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Join Date: May 2003 Age: 22 Posts: 4,067
| God* unless you meant a god.  | |
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09-15-2004, 12:47 AM
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| Not supposed to rhym, and its a piece of ****. i've written better. | |
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09-22-2004, 01:27 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: College Posts: 516
| Not all poems must rhyme. Free verse needs not rhyme and I don't think haiku needs to either.
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