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Literature Haven A place to show off your imagination and creativity skills. Here you can find the Roleplayer's Realm, our newest addition, Dungeons & Dragons, as well as our Writer's Council Forum.

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Old 03-19-2004, 09:08 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Poetry for her


Sleep:

She is there in that wonderful room,
Lying down, thinking about the sun and the moon.

After another hectic day, she enjoys the rest.
The bed, becoming warm and feeling like a nest.

After some time her beautiful eyes close.
Starting to imagine about her love and a rose.

A person, so caring, deserves sweet dreams.
And a future full of love, a life that means.

Does she longs for the pillow to have a heart?
Knowing then to never ever be apart.

He better be there to protect her from the cold.
Loving her as a slave and together growing old.

I hope she feels loved when she falls asleep
Will we ever get a chance for love so deep?



Perfect:

You, in my eyes are the perfect girl
Your midnight blue eyes
I can just watch them forever and be afraid that I will drown in them
Your blonde hair bounces and sways with freedom in the air
And your smile brings happiness to my day
Your laugh soothes my heart
Your carefree spirit inspires me too new limits

When you are sad I want to be there to help you out with your strife
I want to help you and take away whatever it is that is hurting you
When you are sad it seems like your eyes lose their bright glow
You are quieter and you seem to have no energy
I feel helpless when I see you like this
I want to strike down the enigma that has took away your happiness
Thank God it is rare when I see you down

But I cannot ask you out
Not because of a promise I once made
But you already have a boyfriend
I am not the kind of man that would get in the way between you or your boyfriend
As long as your happy, it’s fine with me
I will wait patiently and have faith that things will turn out in the end
You, you are the perfect girl


I've had these both for a while...the second one isn't really a /poem/ or sorts, but it's still so writing.

What you guys think?
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Old 03-20-2004, 01:28 AM   #2 (permalink)
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very good and well thought through. bravo.
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So she told me to come over and I took that trip
and then she pulled out my mushroom tip
and when it came out it went drip, drip, drip
I didn't know she had the G.I. Joe kung foo grip
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