Request for Fiction Stories

[Breman]

I dont know if i can post it in here or not, if cant', sorry bout that.

What i want is, request from you guys some fiction stories. This is how the story should go:~

Good / Evil (A counterpart)
Some Main Characters
World That is Non-realistic
Special Ability
Romance
Present or Future
Whatever You Can Think of!!!

Dont worry bout the tittle, if got a nice one. We'll deal with the tittle later.

Reason:~
I want to make a comic out of it. Not for sell one, just for entertainment only.

Thanks! Have a nice day.

From Breman--

[bamthedoc]

Uh...? What do you mean by this?

[RyanXWing]

yeah, it sounds interesting... but what are you asking for?

[adhesive]

Specifics... tell us what you want and maybe anyone could write a story and you pick your favorite for your comic.

[Breman]

Sorry bout this late, being away for a week and so..

Actually, i think i mentioned it clearly above, but it wont hurt to say it again.

What i need is a story, maybe it could be put like this, a script, storyboard or summary. it's no need to write the whole story out, for it might kinda long, you know. So, a summary of it, is enough. Just write out what is in your mind, if i or others find it's interesting, we'll do a full story or script on it.

If you guys still got any problems, free to speak!! You guyss are mostly welcome!! Thanks!!

[bamthedoc]

Okay... I'm guessing you want info on characters we'd like to see in an original fiction rather than a fanfiction.

Let me try one at a main character and a basic premise...

MAIN Character (good guy)

Bahar Nurgan
PERSONALITY: A harsh young man, Bahar has always relished the idea of a good battle (be it verbal or physical). He has wits to match his physical prowess, though he prefers brains over brawn. He doesn't know his paths are about to cross he who will propel his life forward at a new pace.

MAIN Character (bad guy)
Yurk Ganby
PERSONALITY: A devious little freak, to say the least. He appears to be no more than an average businessman, but will no hesitate to erradicate those who stand in his way. He is a bit arrogant, but that comes from years of wanting to be a ruler of all while he must hide his true self in the dark. Now his plans have time to come to fruition.

PREMISE:
This would be semi-modern and semi-futuristic. It occurs about 30 - 40 years in the future, and is well after some...unusual occurances (up to you). Police are suspect of Yurk, but they have no hard proof. Society is pretty much as we know, still human -- not perfect and always moving toward the impossible perfection. Old threats have died, and new ones have arisen. The "big five" of today are still on top in the future (US, UK, Canada, China, and a Norwegian country... neutral country). Yurk is in charge of a multinational country behind some...blackmarket weapon deals. The countries he is or is attempting to sell to are well under control. Russia is even further divided, though it is still the largest country. The economy basically hasn't changed, save the death of some socialist ideals -- though Yurk still holds some of the more extreme of Facism and Nazism.

(You, I'm sure, can come up with the "rogue" nations.) How's that for starters? Should be...interesting.

[Breman]

Do you imagine it yourself? Quiet good!

I think it is best not to involve the nations in the story.
The black market stuff... maybe to common.

But anyway, i'd try to change it a bit and post again. The characters are not bad, can you desrcribe their appearence? Maybe their hair, clothin' and so on..

edit:

Just to tell you guys that i'll be away for 2 weeks. I'll still check the forum, but won't be able to reply coz its dahm buzzzzzzy!!

[adhesive]

Sean Calski
--The Good Guy--
Formerly a freelance sniper/hitman he is known for countless jobs for the mafia. He was recently hired/forced into working for the government for a rather high pay, but dangerous. He is an agent who works for the slightly losing side of the 2nd American Civil War. Seans favorite weapons include a very advanced Sniper RIfle and a USP(Pistol) owned by his grandpa that sean still wears on his belt today.
Appearance: Sean is about 5 foot 11 and isnt tan but also is not pale. He has short black hair and is always wearing a semi-tight shirt with a loose jacket and lose easy manuevering pants.


Bill Palin
--Bad Guy--
Once a partner with Sean (duriing the days that Sean worked for the Mafia) they broke their friendship after an argument about a girl. Bill decided to work for the opposite country of Sean, since the oter country payed better. Bill uses the highest technology when it comes to weapons and is even more infamous than Sean since Bills kil count is a little higher. Bill hasn't seen Sean since their fight but thinks about killing him everyday. Bill is also the son of a major political leader and is very rich.
Appearance: 6 foot 1, bushy blonde hair normally wearing white unless if he is on a mission, then he wears a trench coat with black leatehr pants(or w/e u want him to look like)


--Plot--
Future about 60 - 70 years
The world suffered a nuclear war 30 years ago and the 15 large countries that have survived still struggle, USA has split into 2 nations,(dont have good names for them) and main Character works for the side that is losing by a little. This time is known as the assasination era to all major military leaders. Military leaders are being assasinated so much now and no one knows who killed who because no country will announce that they hired an assasin. Nukes are not used anymore due to a world wide agreement to ban them right after the war. All the countries literaly shot the nukes out into space so none would remain(please make a better way of nukes disappearing). Shortly after the nukes being launched away the 14 major countries were going to create a treaty where no one would attack each other. But a few small power hungry countries decided to band together to destroy the countries that they hated. Over about a 30 year time period it lead to a world of civil war. The UK is the strongest area because they havent split yet, but all of the major Asian countries have banded against them.

[bamthedoc]

Originally posted by Breman
Do you imagine it yourself? Quiet good!

I think it is best not to involve the nations in the story.
The black market stuff... maybe to common.

But anyway, i'd try to change it a bit and post again. The characters are not bad, can you desrcribe their appearence? Maybe their hair, clothin' and so on..

edit:

Just to tell you guys that i'll be away for 2 weeks. I'll still check the forum, but won't be able to reply coz its dahm buzzzzzzy!!

As all my works, yes... I imagined it myself.
Black Market may be common, but it works -- and is common in real life anyway... As I put in there, a lot, it's best that I only give you a premise. You should work on stuff yourself (not trying to sound harsh).

Appearance, eh? Hmm? Let me give this a go.

BAHAR: He looks younger than the average 23-year old, but it suits him. He has a vibrant hazel-colored hair, made so by his natural golden highlights. He stands at about 5'11", so he's about average in height. He has one distinguishing mark, however. Above his left eye is a scar that goes from near the center of his forhead into a near perfect sideways S-mark to his left temple. He looks scrawny, though he's a healty 160 lb.

YURK: He is a short man well into his forties or fifties (I can't decide -- 50s based on Adolf Hitler, a bit). He only stands 5'1", and he isn't very wide, either. He's weighs in around 130 lb, and can duke it out if need be. His only distinguishing mark is something he wears rather than has -- his very finely crafted monocal. It almost looks to be made from turtle shell, but it's more of a marble-based texture. Afterall, he doesn't want to be hounded for killing endangered species.



FYI: I often do involve political and country stuff in what I do, so that's why I wrote in a bit. I don't feel something is complete until it describes the FULL history of the situation.