What do you think of this poem? - Intelligent Warcraft, StarCraft, and Diablo Discussion Forum

Ignus · 04-21-2007, 01:25 AM

Life Doesn’t Wait for Anyone.

It may be a cold day,
But it doesn’t stop the sun from shining.
The walls may have few windows,
But the light remains bright on us.

The Ferris wheel is ready to go,
But the handle needs to be pulled.
People are waiting,
So pull the handle silly.

Life is a ***** in many ways,
But there are great aspects to it.
Great opportunities rarely come by,
So grab them while you can.

Everyone is getting on the ride,
Wont you join me?
I’ll hold you tight to me,
So you cant fly away.
-Me-

**Roach Of Discord** · 04-21-2007, 01:39 AM

Lawlz, it's good. Nice flow.

Wrong section, though.

~Moved.

Ignus · 05-04-2007, 01:42 AM

I wanted more people to make comments on it.

04-21-2007, 01:25 AM	#1 (permalink)
Ignus BattleForums Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Las Vegas BABY! Age: 19 Posts: 414	What do you think of this poem? Life Doesn’t Wait for Anyone. It may be a cold day, But it doesn’t stop the sun from shining. The walls may have few windows, But the light remains bright on us. The Ferris wheel is ready to go, But the handle needs to be pulled. People are waiting, So pull the handle silly. Life is a ***** in many ways, But there are great aspects to it. Great opportunities rarely come by, So grab them while you can. Everyone is getting on the ride, Wont you join me? I’ll hold you tight to me, So you cant fly away. -Me- __________________ "I see says the Blind Man" "Did you comb your hair w/ the leg of a chair?" "Behind every shadow, the sun shines" "Bisexuality automatically doubles your chances for a date saturday night"

04-21-2007, 01:39 AM	#2 (permalink)
Roach Of Discord Premium Member Join Date: May 2003 Age: 24 Posts: 6,033	Lawlz, it's good. Nice flow. Wrong section, though. ~Moved. __________________ So say goodbye or say forever Choose your fate How else can we survive? Dead is the new alive

05-04-2007, 01:42 AM	#3 (permalink)
Ignus BattleForums Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Las Vegas BABY! Age: 19 Posts: 414	I wanted more people to make comments on it. __________________ "I see says the Blind Man" "Did you comb your hair w/ the leg of a chair?" "Behind every shadow, the sun shines" "Bisexuality automatically doubles your chances for a date saturday night"

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