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SouLess · 04-20-2007, 10:49 AM

Characters, in order of appearance.

Lady DB
Lord DB
Victor DB
Alexander Belk
Jace Belk
Clara Belk
Lord Eveline
Rose Eveline
Master Perek (Pal)
Dalen/Dalen
Erika/Erika
Bandits
Felix
Melindora
Lord Artemis
Lady Consul
Lady El
Argus d'Arras
Red Heat - Balakar
Frostbite - Razade

End char list.

SouLess · 04-20-2007, 10:58 AM

Alexanders History; Book I

I - His birth, death and abadonment.

Lady DB death during labor
Born with star shaped birthmark on shoulder
Victor (15) decides to kill him for loss of mother (very attached to mom, dad hates it and says it makes him weak)
Victor leave Alex outside in woods of The White City
Victor returns and tells Lord DB about it, father says theres hope for him (victor) yet.
Close with wolves circling the baby

II - Adoption as a Belk

Jace Belk finds him and scares off the wolves, taking him back to his house
Clara Belk decides it's ok to keep him, names him Alexander (after Claras father)
6th birthday, enters acadamy to be a Pal
Rose and Lord Eveline are introduced, as well as Master Perek (leader)
Alexander/Rose relationship forms (8)
(12)Top of class at age 12
Graduation top Pal, Rose top Cler
Bottm Cler/Pal seek revenge on Rose/Alexander
(13)Jace and Clara killed by Dalan and Erika
Alexander seeks revenge
Lord Eveline warns him that revenge would lead to expulsion from academy and city
Close with Alexander quits and leaves, rather than be expelled

III - Wilderness Years

Living on his own, encounters same wolf pack
Tames wolves, while training
(14)Death of mother wolf, leaves the pack
Discovers a hideout for outcasts of the city
Erika and Dalen are spotted there, new colors.
Killing of Erika and Dalen, taking Red Heat
Group of bandits that live in hideout attack
(15)Understanding how Red Heat works
(16)Year of training with Red Heat, seeks more power

IV - Return to the City

Lord Eveline accepts him back in with open arms
Meeting of Rose (15) and Alexander again, Rose with Felix (17)
Clash between Alexander and Felix over Rose
Melindora steps in
(18) Melindora and Alex together
Rose and Alexanders secret relationship
(20)Top in class once again
Felix and Alexander make ammends
(21)Graduation day, now a fully fledged Pal (Rose(20) Cler, Mel(22) Dru, Felix(22) Sha
Discussion of Alexander by the five lords

V - Trials of the Belk

SouLess · 04-30-2007, 09:18 AM

Alexanders History; Book I

I - His birth, death and abadonment.

Lady DB death during labor
Born with star shaped birthmark on shoulder
Victor (15) decides to kill him for loss of mother (very attached to mom, dad hates it and says it makes him weak)
Victor leave Alex outside in woods of The White City
Victor returns and tells Lord DB about it, father says theres hope for him (victor) yet.
Close with wolves circling the baby

II - Adoption as a Belk

Jace Belk finds him and scares off the wolves, taking him back to his house
Clara Belk decides it's ok to keep him, names him Alexander (after Claras father)
6th birthday, enters acadamy to be a Pal
Rose and Lord Eveline are introduced, as well as Master Perek (leader)
Alexander/Rose relationship forms (8)
(12)Top of class at age 12
Graduation top Pal, Rose top Cler
Bottm Cler/Pal seek revenge on Rose/Alexander
(13)Jace and Clara killed by Dalan and Erika
Alexander seeks revenge
Lord Eveline warns him that revenge would lead to expulsion from academy and city
Close with Alexander quits and leaves, rather than be expelled

III - Wilderness Years

Living on his own, encounters same wolf pack
Tames wolves, while training
(14)Death of mother wolf, leaves the pack
Discovers a hideout for outcasts of the city
Erika and Dalen are spotted there, new colors.
Killing of Erika and Dalen, taking Red Heat
Group of bandits that live in hideout attack
(15)Understanding how Red Heat works
(16)Year of training with Red Heat, seeks more power

IV - Return to the City

Lord Eveline accepts him back in with open arms
Meeting of Rose (15) and Alexander again, Rose with Felix (17)
Clash between Alexander and Felix over Rose
Melindora steps in
(18) Melindora and Alex together
Rose and Alexanders secret relationship
(20)Top in class once again
Felix and Alexander make ammends
(21)Graduation day, now a fully fledged Pal (Rose(20) Cler, Mel(22) Dru, Felix(22) Sha
Discussion of Alexander by the five lords

V - Trials of the Belk

After Graduation returns home
Finds Jace's work in locked room
Letter to him from Jace
Family broke rules of single spectrum
Weapon he carries (assumed, as it was left to him) Red Heat is one of their heirlooms, granting him power of red.
Necklace inside letter
Binding for Frostbite
Any weapon he puts it on gains Frostbites properties
Wraps around his dagger, transforms into a blue frozen blade

Removes it, wraps it around Red Heat
Red Heat and Frostbite are sentient objects (symbiotes)
Combined they pull him into their dimension
Jace and Clara are there and they teach him how to use the weapons
Special weapon properties brought on by symbioates
Balakar (Red Heat) - Flame Shield, large fire toad
Razade (Frostbite) - Frozen Touch, huge levithan creature
Falls into a catatonic state (while his mind is inside the elder-dimension learning how to use the weapons properly), Rose finds him

End Book 1

SouLess · 05-05-2007, 02:01 PM

Gods and Symbiote Info

Illandri - White - Tall / Stout -- Baelog's Twin(Middle 40's)
Baelog - Black - Crippled / Weak -- Illandri's Twin
Kaelos - Green - Muscular / One Handed -- Oldest(Middle 70s)
Shrelok - Blue - Beautiful / Female -- Goremond's Twin (Young 20s)
Goremond - Red - Smartest / Shortest -- Shrelok's Twin (Youngest)

Eternalus - Reinken - White - Staff/Sword - Lord Eveline
Nightblade - Valner - Black - User Consent - Richard/Victor/Alexander
Hand Of Kaelos - Quel'Nos - Green - Claw - Felix
Frostbite - Razade - Blue - Necklace - Jace/Alexander
Red Heat - Balakar - Red - Sword - Clara/Alexander

Reinken - Male angel, golden armor, long sword and shield
Valner - Reaper, large shadow scythe
Quel'nos - Wood nymph
Razade - Huge levithan creature
Balakar - Giant red toad

Reinken can absorb light to charge the weilders abilities, allow them to use deadly armageddon types
Valner can absrob the powers of those it slays, to an extent. No healing or white spells
Quel'nos can transform it's weilder into a deathbeast, increasing the strength and speed for a limited time
Balakar can surround it's weilder in flame, making him impervious to all damage for a short amount of time
Razade can coat whatever it's bind to to where it will freeze upon touch.

Reinken --> Balakar --> Quel'nos --> Razade --> Valner --> Reinken

Static · 05-18-2007, 09:59 PM

Looks like you went through some time...

Is this for School or an Rp type dealy?

SouLess · 05-23-2007, 02:19 AM

Book I'm working on.

SouLess · 09-12-2007, 09:31 PM

**** all that, starting over.

SouLess · 09-12-2007, 09:58 PM

A:I::I

Thunder crackles in the background as a castle is shown, sillhoetted. Two male forms are fighting in an open field not far from the castle, one in black robes, one in dark red chain mail. The man in the black robes is easily overpowering the man in the red, as another bolt of lightning crackles.

Snakelike voice:
"Where are your gods now brother?"

Man in black strikes Alexander to his knees, and removes his helmet, revealing Alexander's face.

Alexander:
"You won't get away with this, you will NOT win this war! You hear me, Victor?!"

The man in black, revealed to be Victor:
"It's a shame you put such faith in them. But you should know, they havn't abandoned you...They were never with you to begin with!"

Alexander:
"As long as I belive in them, they are wi-"

Victor, cutting in:
"Oh please, spare me your foolishness! From my standing, everything is clear. My "god", my resolve to rule, has conqoured all the 'gods' you believe in.

Victor raises his sword to kill Alexander, as it starts to rain

Victor, lookin shocked as he stops his attack on Alexander:
"Rain? This is no good."

Victor turns to see a large man clad in blue cloth, bloody and broken holding onto his left shoulder. The man is all bloodied, as his left hand is glowing a bight blue.

Victor:
"Argus?! How did you survive?"

The large man, Argus, clenches his fist before Victor can finish his thought. Two large balls of water smash into Victor, slamming him to the ground, unconscious.

Argus:
"Alex, get up and get out of here. We'll catch up with you!"

Alexander:
"We? Who else survived?"

Two figures appear from the shadows of a nearby watchtower. One female, Melindora, dressed in a green ceremonial dress and one male, Felix, dressed in a similar green ceremonial robe.

Felix:
"Argus can only hold him for a few more minutes, then it's up to us sis. You ready?"

Melindora:
"After what he did, I'll always be ready."

Melindora's green eyes turn completely red as her voice growls.

Argus:
"Alexander! You are the only one of us that can kill him at this point, flee here so you can heal!"

Victor, after regaining his composure from the attack, rushes over to Argus, stabbing him through the heart with his sword

Victor:
"YOU will be going NO WHERE, fool!"

Melindora:
"Our turn..."

04-20-2007, 10:49 AM	#1 (permalink)
SouLess The best of both worlds Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 10,764	My bigassthread for TBoAI; Nocturne Characters, in order of appearance. Lady DB Lord DB Victor DB Alexander Belk Jace Belk Clara Belk Lord Eveline Rose Eveline Master Perek (Pal) Dalen/Dalen Erika/Erika Bandits Felix Melindora Lord Artemis Lady Consul Lady El Argus d'Arras Red Heat - Balakar Frostbite - Razade End char list. __________________ Stars, Hide Your Fires! Let Not Light See My Black And Deep Desires. Song of the week thread! POST YOUR ****ING SONGS!

04-20-2007, 10:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
SouLess The best of both worlds Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 10,764	Alexanders History; Book I I - His birth, death and abadonment. Lady DB death during labor Born with star shaped birthmark on shoulder Victor (15) decides to kill him for loss of mother (very attached to mom, dad hates it and says it makes him weak) Victor leave Alex outside in woods of The White City Victor returns and tells Lord DB about it, father says theres hope for him (victor) yet. Close with wolves circling the baby II - Adoption as a Belk Jace Belk finds him and scares off the wolves, taking him back to his house Clara Belk decides it's ok to keep him, names him Alexander (after Claras father) 6th birthday, enters acadamy to be a Pal Rose and Lord Eveline are introduced, as well as Master Perek (leader) Alexander/Rose relationship forms (8) (12)Top of class at age 12 Graduation top Pal, Rose top Cler Bottm Cler/Pal seek revenge on Rose/Alexander (13)Jace and Clara killed by Dalan and Erika Alexander seeks revenge Lord Eveline warns him that revenge would lead to expulsion from academy and city Close with Alexander quits and leaves, rather than be expelled III - Wilderness Years Living on his own, encounters same wolf pack Tames wolves, while training (14)Death of mother wolf, leaves the pack Discovers a hideout for outcasts of the city Erika and Dalen are spotted there, new colors. Killing of Erika and Dalen, taking Red Heat Group of bandits that live in hideout attack (15)Understanding how Red Heat works (16)Year of training with Red Heat, seeks more power IV - Return to the City Lord Eveline accepts him back in with open arms Meeting of Rose (15) and Alexander again, Rose with Felix (17) Clash between Alexander and Felix over Rose Melindora steps in (18) Melindora and Alex together Rose and Alexanders secret relationship (20)Top in class once again Felix and Alexander make ammends (21)Graduation day, now a fully fledged Pal (Rose(20) Cler, Mel(22) Dru, Felix(22) Sha Discussion of Alexander by the five lords V - Trials of the Belk __________________ Stars, Hide Your Fires! Let Not Light See My Black And Deep Desires. Song of the week thread! POST YOUR ***ING SONGS! Last edited by SouLess; 04-20-2007 at 11:07 AM.*

04-30-2007, 09:18 AM	#3 (permalink)
SouLess The best of both worlds Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 10,764	Alexanders History; Book I I - His birth, death and abadonment. Lady DB death during labor Born with star shaped birthmark on shoulder Victor (15) decides to kill him for loss of mother (very attached to mom, dad hates it and says it makes him weak) Victor leave Alex outside in woods of The White City Victor returns and tells Lord DB about it, father says theres hope for him (victor) yet. Close with wolves circling the baby II - Adoption as a Belk Jace Belk finds him and scares off the wolves, taking him back to his house Clara Belk decides it's ok to keep him, names him Alexander (after Claras father) 6th birthday, enters acadamy to be a Pal Rose and Lord Eveline are introduced, as well as Master Perek (leader) Alexander/Rose relationship forms (8) (12)Top of class at age 12 Graduation top Pal, Rose top Cler Bottm Cler/Pal seek revenge on Rose/Alexander (13)Jace and Clara killed by Dalan and Erika Alexander seeks revenge Lord Eveline warns him that revenge would lead to expulsion from academy and city Close with Alexander quits and leaves, rather than be expelled III - Wilderness Years Living on his own, encounters same wolf pack Tames wolves, while training (14)Death of mother wolf, leaves the pack Discovers a hideout for outcasts of the city Erika and Dalen are spotted there, new colors. Killing of Erika and Dalen, taking Red Heat Group of bandits that live in hideout attack (15)Understanding how Red Heat works (16)Year of training with Red Heat, seeks more power IV - Return to the City Lord Eveline accepts him back in with open arms Meeting of Rose (15) and Alexander again, Rose with Felix (17) Clash between Alexander and Felix over Rose Melindora steps in (18) Melindora and Alex together Rose and Alexanders secret relationship (20)Top in class once again Felix and Alexander make ammends (21)Graduation day, now a fully fledged Pal (Rose(20) Cler, Mel(22) Dru, Felix(22) Sha Discussion of Alexander by the five lords V - Trials of the Belk After Graduation returns home Finds Jace's work in locked room Letter to him from Jace Family broke rules of single spectrum Weapon he carries (assumed, as it was left to him) Red Heat is one of their heirlooms, granting him power of red. Necklace inside letter Binding for Frostbite Any weapon he puts it on gains Frostbites properties Wraps around his dagger, transforms into a blue frozen blade Removes it, wraps it around Red Heat Red Heat and Frostbite are sentient objects (symbiotes) Combined they pull him into their dimension Jace and Clara are there and they teach him how to use the weapons Special weapon properties brought on by symbioates Balakar (Red Heat) - Flame Shield, large fire toad Razade (Frostbite) - Frozen Touch, huge levithan creature Falls into a catatonic state (while his mind is inside the elder-dimension learning how to use the weapons properly), Rose finds him End Book 1 __________________ Stars, Hide Your Fires! Let Not Light See My Black And Deep Desires. Song of the week thread! POST YOUR ***ING SONGS! Last edited by SouLess; 04-30-2007 at 09:25 AM.*

05-05-2007, 02:01 PM	#4 (permalink)
SouLess The best of both worlds Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 10,764	Gods and Symbiote Info Illandri - White - Tall / Stout -- Baelog's Twin(Middle 40's) Baelog - Black - Crippled / Weak -- Illandri's Twin Kaelos - Green - Muscular / One Handed -- Oldest(Middle 70s) Shrelok - Blue - Beautiful / Female -- Goremond's Twin (Young 20s) Goremond - Red - Smartest / Shortest -- Shrelok's Twin (Youngest) Eternalus - Reinken - White - Staff/Sword - Lord Eveline Nightblade - Valner - Black - User Consent - Richard/Victor/Alexander Hand Of Kaelos - Quel'Nos - Green - Claw - Felix Frostbite - Razade - Blue - Necklace - Jace/Alexander Red Heat - Balakar - Red - Sword - Clara/Alexander Reinken - Male angel, golden armor, long sword and shield Valner - Reaper, large shadow scythe Quel'nos - Wood nymph Razade - Huge levithan creature Balakar - Giant red toad Reinken can absorb light to charge the weilders abilities, allow them to use deadly armageddon types Valner can absrob the powers of those it slays, to an extent. No healing or white spells Quel'nos can transform it's weilder into a deathbeast, increasing the strength and speed for a limited time Balakar can surround it's weilder in flame, making him impervious to all damage for a short amount of time Razade can coat whatever it's bind to to where it will freeze upon touch. Reinken --> Balakar --> Quel'nos --> Razade --> Valner --> Reinken __________________ Stars, Hide Your Fires! Let Not Light See My Black And Deep Desires. Song of the week thread! POST YOUR ****ING SONGS!

05-23-2007, 02:19 AM	#6 (permalink)
SouLess The best of both worlds Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 10,764	Book I'm working on. __________________ Stars, Hide Your Fires! Let Not Light See My Black And Deep Desires. Song of the week thread! POST YOUR ****ING SONGS!

09-12-2007, 09:31 PM	#7 (permalink)
SouLess The best of both worlds Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 10,764	** all that, starting over. __________________ Stars, Hide Your Fires! Let Not Light See My Black And Deep Desires. Song of the week thread! POST YOUR **ING SONGS!

09-12-2007, 09:58 PM	#8 (permalink)
SouLess The best of both worlds Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 10,764	A:I::I Thunder crackles in the background as a castle is shown, sillhoetted. Two male forms are fighting in an open field not far from the castle, one in black robes, one in dark red chain mail. The man in the black robes is easily overpowering the man in the red, as another bolt of lightning crackles. Snakelike voice: "Where are your gods now brother?" Man in black strikes Alexander to his knees, and removes his helmet, revealing Alexander's face. Alexander: "You won't get away with this, you will NOT win this war! You hear me, Victor?!" The man in black, revealed to be Victor: "It's a shame you put such faith in them. But you should know, they havn't abandoned you...They were never with you to begin with!" Alexander: "As long as I belive in them, they are wi-" Victor, cutting in: "Oh please, spare me your foolishness! From my standing, everything is clear. My "god", my resolve to rule, has conqoured all the 'gods' you believe in. Victor raises his sword to kill Alexander, as it starts to rain Victor, lookin shocked as he stops his attack on Alexander: "Rain? This is no good." Victor turns to see a large man clad in blue cloth, bloody and broken holding onto his left shoulder. The man is all bloodied, as his left hand is glowing a bight blue. Victor: "Argus?! How did you survive?" The large man, Argus, clenches his fist before Victor can finish his thought. Two large balls of water smash into Victor, slamming him to the ground, unconscious. Argus: "Alex, get up and get out of here. We'll catch up with you!" Alexander: "We? Who else survived?" Two figures appear from the shadows of a nearby watchtower. One female, Melindora, dressed in a green ceremonial dress and one male, Felix, dressed in a similar green ceremonial robe. Felix: "Argus can only hold him for a few more minutes, then it's up to us sis. You ready?" Melindora: "After what he did, I'll always be ready." Melindora's green eyes turn completely red as her voice growls. Argus: "Alexander! You are the only one of us that can kill him at this point, flee here so you can heal!" Victor, after regaining his composure from the attack, rushes over to Argus, stabbing him through the heart with his sword Victor: "YOU will be going NO WHERE, fool!" Melindora: "Our turn..." __________________ Stars, Hide Your Fires! Let Not Light See My Black And Deep Desires. Song of the week thread! POST YOUR ****ING SONGS!

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