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Old 04-20-2007, 10:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
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My bigassthread for TBoAI; Nocturne

Characters, in order of appearance.

Lady DB
Lord DB
Victor DB

Alexander Belk
Jace Belk
Clara Belk
Lord Eveline
Rose Eveline

Master Perek (Pal)
Dalen/Dalen
Erika/Erika
Bandits
Felix
Melindora
Lord Artemis

Lady Consul
Lady El
Argus d'Arras
Red Heat - Balakar
Frostbite - Razade

End char list.
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Old 04-20-2007, 10:58 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Alexanders History; Book I

I - His birth, death and abadonment.
Lady DB death during labor
Born with star shaped birthmark on shoulder
Victor (15) decides to kill him for loss of mother (very attached to mom, dad hates it and says it makes him weak)
Victor leave Alex outside in woods of The White City
Victor returns and tells Lord DB about it, father says theres hope for him (victor) yet.
Close with wolves circling the baby
II - Adoption as a Belk
Jace Belk finds him and scares off the wolves, taking him back to his house
Clara Belk decides it's ok to keep him, names him Alexander (after Claras father)
6th birthday, enters acadamy to be a Pal
Rose and Lord Eveline are introduced, as well as Master Perek (leader)
Alexander/Rose relationship forms (8)
(12)Top of class at age 12
Graduation top Pal, Rose top Cler
Bottm Cler/Pal seek revenge on Rose/Alexander
(13)Jace and Clara killed by Dalan and Erika
Alexander seeks revenge
Lord Eveline warns him that revenge would lead to expulsion from academy and city
Close with Alexander quits and leaves, rather than be expelled
III - Wilderness Years
Living on his own, encounters same wolf pack
Tames wolves, while training
(14)Death of mother wolf, leaves the pack
Discovers a hideout for outcasts of the city
Erika and Dalen are spotted there, new colors.
Killing of Erika and Dalen, taking Red Heat
Group of bandits that live in hideout attack
(15)Understanding how Red Heat works
(16)Year of training with Red Heat, seeks more power
IV - Return to the City
Lord Eveline accepts him back in with open arms
Meeting of Rose (15) and Alexander again, Rose with Felix (17)
Clash between Alexander and Felix over Rose
Melindora steps in
(18) Melindora and Alex together
Rose and Alexanders secret relationship
(20)Top in class once again
Felix and Alexander make ammends
(21)Graduation day, now a fully fledged Pal (Rose(20) Cler, Mel(22) Dru, Felix(22) Sha
Discussion of Alexander by the five lords

V - Trials of the Belk



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Old 04-30-2007, 09:18 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Alexanders History; Book I

I - His birth, death and abadonment.
Lady DB death during labor
Born with star shaped birthmark on shoulder
Victor (15) decides to kill him for loss of mother (very attached to mom, dad hates it and says it makes him weak)
Victor leave Alex outside in woods of The White City
Victor returns and tells Lord DB about it, father says theres hope for him (victor) yet.
Close with wolves circling the baby
II - Adoption as a Belk
Jace Belk finds him and scares off the wolves, taking him back to his house
Clara Belk decides it's ok to keep him, names him Alexander (after Claras father)
6th birthday, enters acadamy to be a Pal
Rose and Lord Eveline are introduced, as well as Master Perek (leader)
Alexander/Rose relationship forms (8)
(12)Top of class at age 12
Graduation top Pal, Rose top Cler
Bottm Cler/Pal seek revenge on Rose/Alexander
(13)Jace and Clara killed by Dalan and Erika
Alexander seeks revenge
Lord Eveline warns him that revenge would lead to expulsion from academy and city
Close with Alexander quits and leaves, rather than be expelled
III - Wilderness Years
Living on his own, encounters same wolf pack
Tames wolves, while training
(14)Death of mother wolf, leaves the pack
Discovers a hideout for outcasts of the city
Erika and Dalen are spotted there, new colors.
Killing of Erika and Dalen, taking Red Heat
Group of bandits that live in hideout attack
(15)Understanding how Red Heat works
(16)Year of training with Red Heat, seeks more power
IV - Return to the City
Lord Eveline accepts him back in with open arms
Meeting of Rose (15) and Alexander again, Rose with Felix (17)
Clash between Alexander and Felix over Rose
Melindora steps in
(18) Melindora and Alex together
Rose and Alexanders secret relationship
(20)Top in class once again
Felix and Alexander make ammends
(21)Graduation day, now a fully fledged Pal (Rose(20) Cler, Mel(22) Dru, Felix(22) Sha
Discussion of Alexander by the five lords
V - Trials of the Belk
After Graduation returns home
Finds Jace's work in locked room
Letter to him from Jace
Family broke rules of single spectrum
Weapon he carries (assumed, as it was left to him) Red Heat is one of their heirlooms, granting him power of red.
Necklace inside letter
Binding for Frostbite
Any weapon he puts it on gains Frostbites properties
Wraps around his dagger, transforms into a blue frozen blade
Removes it, wraps it around Red Heat
Red Heat and Frostbite are sentient objects (symbiotes)
Combined they pull him into their dimension
Jace and Clara are there and they teach him how to use the weapons
Special weapon properties brought on by symbioates
Balakar (Red Heat) - Flame Shield, large fire toad
Razade (Frostbite) - Frozen Touch, huge levithan creature
Falls into a catatonic state (while his mind is inside the elder-dimension learning how to use the weapons properly), Rose finds him
End Book 1

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Old 05-05-2007, 02:01 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Gods and Symbiote Info

Illandri - White - Tall / Stout -- Baelog's Twin(Middle 40's)
Baelog - Black - Crippled / Weak -- Illandri's Twin
Kaelos - Green - Muscular / One Handed -- Oldest(Middle 70s)
Shrelok - Blue - Beautiful / Female -- Goremond's Twin (Young 20s)
Goremond - Red - Smartest / Shortest -- Shrelok's Twin (Youngest)

Eternalus - Reinken - White - Staff/Sword - Lord Eveline
Nightblade - Valner - Black - User Consent - Richard/Victor/Alexander
Hand Of Kaelos - Quel'Nos - Green - Claw - Felix
Frostbite - Razade - Blue - Necklace - Jace/Alexander
Red Heat - Balakar - Red - Sword - Clara/Alexander

Reinken - Male angel, golden armor, long sword and shield
Valner - Reaper, large shadow scythe
Quel'nos - Wood nymph
Razade - Huge levithan creature
Balakar - Giant red toad

Reinken can absorb light to charge the weilders abilities, allow them to use deadly armageddon types
Valner can absrob the powers of those it slays, to an extent. No healing or white spells
Quel'nos can transform it's weilder into a deathbeast, increasing the strength and speed for a limited time
Balakar can surround it's weilder in flame, making him impervious to all damage for a short amount of time
Razade can coat whatever it's bind to to where it will freeze upon touch.

Reinken --> Balakar --> Quel'nos --> Razade --> Valner --> Reinken
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Book I'm working on.
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**** all that, starting over.
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A:I::I

Thunder crackles in the background as a castle is shown, sillhoetted. Two male forms are fighting in an open field not far from the castle, one in black robes, one in dark red chain mail. The man in the black robes is easily overpowering the man in the red, as another bolt of lightning crackles.

Snakelike voice:
"Where are your gods now brother?"

Man in black strikes Alexander to his knees, and removes his helmet, revealing Alexander's face.

Alexander:
"You won't get away with this, you will NOT win this war! You hear me, Victor?!"

The man in black, revealed to be Victor:
"It's a shame you put such faith in them. But you should know, they havn't abandoned you...They were never with you to begin with!"

Alexander:
"As long as I belive in them, they are wi-"

Victor, cutting in:
"Oh please, spare me your foolishness! From my standing, everything is clear. My "god", my resolve to rule, has conqoured all the 'gods' you believe in.

Victor raises his sword to kill Alexander, as it starts to rain

Victor, lookin shocked as he stops his attack on Alexander:
"Rain? This is no good."

Victor turns to see a large man clad in blue cloth, bloody and broken holding onto his left shoulder. The man is all bloodied, as his left hand is glowing a bight blue.

Victor:
"Argus?! How did you survive?"

The large man, Argus, clenches his fist before Victor can finish his thought. Two large balls of water smash into Victor, slamming him to the ground, unconscious.

Argus:
"Alex, get up and get out of here. We'll catch up with you!"

Alexander:
"We? Who else survived?"

Two figures appear from the shadows of a nearby watchtower. One female, Melindora, dressed in a green ceremonial dress and one male, Felix, dressed in a similar green ceremonial robe.

Felix:
"Argus can only hold him for a few more minutes, then it's up to us sis. You ready?"

Melindora:
"After what he did, I'll always be ready."

Melindora's green eyes turn completely red as her voice growls.

Argus:
"Alexander! You are the only one of us that can kill him at this point, flee here so you can heal!"

Victor, after regaining his composure from the attack, rushes over to Argus, stabbing him through the heart with his sword

Victor:
"YOU will be going NO WHERE, fool!"

Melindora:
"Our turn..."
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