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Literature Haven A place to show off your imagination and creativity skills. Here you can find the Roleplayer's Realm, our newest addition, Dungeons & Dragons, as well as our Writer's Council Forum.

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Old 05-17-2006, 09:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A short poem

"Grocery List"

I wrote my grocery list
As a free verse poem
And the 'two boxes of cereal'
Was a metaphor.
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Old 05-18-2006, 04:24 PM   #2 (permalink)
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deep... reeaal deep...
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Old 05-19-2006, 04:48 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 05-19-2006, 03:12 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Please stick to constructive feedback kthx
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Old 05-20-2006, 02:22 AM   #5 (permalink)
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:fwink eee.....where's the poem?
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Old 05-20-2006, 02:25 AM   #6 (permalink)
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You're good at making bad poems.
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Old 05-20-2006, 02:40 AM   #7 (permalink)
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where's the poem?
...the first post in the thread?
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CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK ONLY PLZ THX
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Old 05-20-2006, 02:41 AM   #8 (permalink)
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I'm poiting out the bright side of things.
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Old 05-20-2006, 02:50 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Old 05-20-2006, 02:56 AM   #10 (permalink)
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eh..frankly.I dont understand this poem.
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Old 05-20-2006, 03:04 AM   #11 (permalink)
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I pretend that I understand it, but only because I wrote it.
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Old 09-29-2006, 09:07 AM   #12 (permalink)
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use shreddies instead of cereal, I don't care what kind of cereal you actually get (but shreddies are better).
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Old 09-29-2006, 01:58 PM   #13 (permalink)
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