Second Real try at space art

[Vic]

and i still dont like it but hay w/e


http://www.deviantart.com/view/11348189/



please take a looksie

[TweaK]

It's just too flat... There doesn't seem to be much depth to it at all, there isn't much happening either. The right planet seems like you took a texture and spherisized the hell out of it, so It's ugly. The line in the middle I thought was a skip in the picture loading, and the flare it's attatched to is a single filter.

[Vic]

Originally Posted by TweaK

It's just too flat... There doesn't seem to be much depth to it at all, there isn't much happening either. The right planet seems like you took a texture and spherisized the hell out of it, so It's ugly. The line in the middle I thought was a skip in the picture loading, and the flare it's attatched to is a single filter.

i made the flare by hand lol and

the red planet does look like i did but i only use 25% on it =\ its just the texture

and as for depth thats cause my stars dont add anything to it also the planets are to big

thanks for the input ^^

[Brandon]

Eh you need to add like red star dust and shit liek that and lil more depht to it then i <3 it. im useing the current one righ t now.. thx

[Vic]

Originally Posted by ScaRRed4lyf3

you need to add like red star dust and shit

thats hard and im not that great at it but this is only a second try and i have been working on that looks like shit when i do it xD

Originally Posted by ScaRRed4lyf3

im useing the current one righ t now.. thx

thanks

[Sicloan]

It doesnt spark my interest. The whole thing has been done before and its not to entertaining. I would maybe try to do something different. And that flare blows imo.

[UnforgivinAngel]

that is not really all that good, if you wana see some space art to get some ideas rolling, look at alyn's work http://alyn.deviantart.com/gallery/

[TweaK]

Or the evergreat greg martin.

[Vic]

Originally Posted by TweaK

Or the evergreat greg martin.

reason for starting space art

Greg is and always will be the best

im doing aonter one atm but im just working on stars and shit mostly dicking around

[Diabolical Nightmare]

The planets arn't that great, theres just 3 of em, a few lense flares, a solid white line, and the same little 400x600ish starfield copied over and over...

[Vic]

Originally Posted by Diabolical Nightmare

and the same little 400x600ish starfield copied over and over...

:loopy like i said stares suck but you are wrong about that it was a 3200x2400 compressed

[Beer $lut]

thats very bad

[Macilyn Manson]

Just reading the stupid "Timeless Dawn" title makes me dislike it.

[Breman]

For me, its quite okay. Just the sun that produce the flare or ray of light, it's seem to make the whole pic cut into two. Too long, i think....

[FuLouZero]

Props to vicious Though the lens flare line is bold and ghey