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Old 11-25-2004, 04:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
l33t 0n3
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sounds like a homosexual romance novel, no offence.

Blanking some words out to make it nasty:
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As i fell to the floor i felt the vibration of his **** pounding the *** as he dashed towards me. As he grabbed my **** to raise me to his level i strained for breath. Suddenly he jerked my **** to the side and embraced me.The kindreds strength was astounding as my **** hovered above the floor.His bite and grip were strong, to strong to break free by my own strength. I felt around everywhere feeling for something that would break his embrace,but it was to late he had finished with me and i was tossed aside like a rag doll.
And a short story is more like 4-10 pages, not a paragraph

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