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battle plans · 03-07-2004, 09:45 PM

great story, i agree with most need to work on grammer. and when they fight i think u should talk about the fight more like descripte it that would be kool

03-07-2004, 09:45 PM	#8 (permalink)
battle plans BattleForums Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: canada rocks Posts: 217	great story, i agree with most need to work on grammer. and when they fight i think u should talk about the fight more like descripte it that would be kool __________________