[bamthedoc]

I really don't know what to think... You created the drug task force well enough. You also invented a drug with interesting side-affects, though believable. The presentation seems a bit off, in my opinion, but, then again, this isn't as near completion as you may like.

You do have some talent, and I'd like to recommend you enter the Short Stor Contest. The link's in my signature. Keep in mind it can be based on something else (i.e. a fanfiction) or it can be completely original. Just follow the rules if you decide to enter

Off Topic:
Since I can see you have some writing skills, would you mind reading my fanfictions -- and anthing original I've submitted. I know I'm the mod here, but don't let that discourage you. I like feedback (read: constructive critizism).