| An interesting story, and a dire cliffhanger. I'd say, for a start, this is excellent. This is the stuff novels are made from. I'd really like to see where this goes, to say the least.
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*mumbles something about "puppy dog eyes" and "crying women"*
Currently = Wii pwns my soul ;_;
Wii + Bonnie Lasses = Ultimate Combination! |