| Story: 7/10
Originality: 7/10
Style: 8/10
Structure: 7/10
Spelling/Grammer: 9/10
Overall: 8
Funny, very funny! I have to ask: Where did you get the idea? For Portuguese (<--See, my spelling stinks! I don't know if that's right...) being your first language, that is an excellent use of spelling/grammer. Das ist nich schlect! Looking forward to more, and maybe even serious, stories!
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