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bamthedoc · 07-04-2003, 05:21 PM

I'll only list what changed:

Story: 6/10
Originality: 5/10
Overall: 6

Your style, structure, and grammer/spelling really haven't improved. But the story is more compelling, and it appears to be more original. It might be best to try "compressing" this into a document through Notepad or Wordpad. After you do that, though, I will split all previous posts into the Void. This will actually benefit how "readable" your text is. Also try pasting it to Word and fixing those Grammer/Spelling errors. It looks promising as a story.

07-04-2003, 05:21 PM	#8 (permalink)
bamthedoc King Endymion Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: North Carolina, USA Age: 25 Posts: 4,288	I'll only list what changed: Story: 6/10 Originality: 5/10 Overall: 6 Your style, structure, and grammer/spelling really haven't improved. But the story is more compelling, and it appears to be more original. It might be best to try "compressing" this into a document through Notepad or Wordpad. After you do that, though, I will split all previous posts into the Void. This will actually benefit how "readable" your text is. Also try pasting it to Word and fixing those Grammer/Spelling errors. It looks promising as a story. __________________ I am a force of good that none can oppose. BAM the DOC a.k.a. DragonAgnstEvil Role-Player's Realm ~ Literature Haven mumbles something about "puppy dog eyes" and "crying women" Currently = Wii pwns my soul ;_; Wii + Bonnie Lasses = Ultimate Combination!