Story: Interesting. It should have ended at the fart. 7/10
Originality: First BattleForums FF. 8/10
Style: Disastrous. 9/10.
Structure: Insane. 8/10.
Spelling-grammar: The *Amantis was not so chicken* gets my 10/10!
Overall:Can't wait for part Two. 8/10.