[Amantis]

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You have been affectionately
~BANNED~
for posting such explicit story lines about your superiors!

Nah...joking. You're already 'banned' anyway, so no point there, right?

Alrighty, here are my comments:
Story - Fairytale style. Cute 8/10
Originality - They all lived happily ever after...not 'Brothers Grimm' (unabridged version) enough, but it will do 7/10
Style - Quite hard to pinpoint, but then and again, you've already got that funny unique style of yours, so: 9/10
structure - Introduction, buildup, body, climax, conclusion, recession. Logical enough 10/10
Spelling/Grammar - Pretty good compared to most people who are more fluent in the language 9/10
Overall - Short and simple, yet funny and enjoyable. Many can express themselves in 800 words, but how many can express the same ideas under 100? 9/10

- Amantis