[bamthedoc]

scpv.txt

Story: 8/10
Originality: 7/10
Style: 5/10
Structured: 5/10
Spelling/Grammer: 8/10
Overall: 7

The story was nice. It was well driven, and the originality certainly helped. The style and structure could be worked on. There were a few spelling and grammer mistakes that I notices. Overall, well done.

scvw.txt

Story: 7/10
Originality: 8/10
Style: 7/10
Structured: 7/10
Spelling/Grammer: 8/10
Overall: 7.5

The story was good. Well driven and original. The style and structure were well selected, but could use some work. There were still spelling and grammer mistakes, but that can always be expected. Overall, nice job. It seemed to be better on track than the "newer" one.