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Old 06-27-2003, 08:04 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice job. It's a good poem, but I'm lacking in how to rate poems. So I'll put it this way:

Overall: 8/10

I liked it, but I took off simply because it somewhat lacked originality. Plus, I don't know all the criteria, so, if someone would enlighten me, I might edit that score by virtue of further analysis.
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