| shortys_girl
Nice job. It's a good poem, but I'm lacking in how to rate poems. So I'll put it this way:
Overall: 8/10
I liked it, but I took off simply because it somewhat lacked originality. Plus, I don't know all the criteria, so, if someone would enlighten me, I might edit that score by virtue of further analysis.
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*mumbles something about "puppy dog eyes" and "crying women"*
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