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bamthedoc · 06-21-2003, 05:19 AM

Ah, me sees!

^Not spam! I repeat! Not spam!

It does have drive to it though. But...to tell the truth...I was expecting it to be longer...I don't know why. I like your motivational force, however. That's another good aspect. I'll get Akules...or is it Kaldaris'...rules for "judging" and do it properly.

Story 8/10
Originality 7/10
Style 9/10
Structured 8/10
Spelling/Grammer Can't remember for the life of me...guessing I'd say 9/10
Overall 8.5 or 8.75 (I don't care, make higher if you want)

06-21-2003, 05:19 AM	#4 (permalink)
bamthedoc King Endymion Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: North Carolina, USA Age: 25 Posts: 4,288	Ah, me sees! ^Not spam! I repeat! Not spam! It does have drive to it though. But...to tell the truth...I was expecting it to be longer...I don't know why. I like your motivational force, however. That's another good aspect. I'll get Akules...or is it Kaldaris'...rules for "judging" and do it properly. Story 8/10 Originality 7/10 Style 9/10 Structured 8/10 Spelling/Grammer Can't remember for the life of me...guessing I'd say 9/10 Overall 8.5 or 8.75 (I don't care, make higher if you want) __________________ I am a force of good that none can oppose. BAM the DOC a.k.a. DragonAgnstEvil Role-Player's Realm ~ Literature Haven mumbles something about "puppy dog eyes" and "crying women" Currently = Wii pwns my soul ;_; Wii + Bonnie Lasses = Ultimate Combination! Last edited by bamthedoc; 06-21-2003 at 05:23 AM.