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^Not spam! I repeat! Not spam!
It does have drive to it though. But...to tell the truth...I was expecting it to be longer...I don't know why. I like your motivational force, however. That's another good aspect. I'll get Akules...or is it Kaldaris'...rules for "judging" and do it properly.
Story 8/10
Originality 7/10
Style 9/10
Structured 8/10
Spelling/Grammer Can't remember for the life of me...guessing I'd say 9/10
Overall 8.5 or 8.75 (I don't care, make higher if you want)
__________________ I am a force of good that none can oppose. BAM the DOC
a.k.a.
DragonAgnstEvil  Role-Player's Realm ~ Literature Haven
*mumbles something about "puppy dog eyes" and "crying women"*
Currently = Wii pwns my soul ;_;
Wii + Bonnie Lasses = Ultimate Combination!
Last edited by bamthedoc; 06-21-2003 at 05:23 AM.
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