[bamthedoc]

Yeah...you're right about too much Greek tragedy...lay off it for a while...

This reminds me off...oh, what was the name of that story? In any case, good if not...overly tramatic. I'd actually give a "comment" if I knew what to say beyond that...

Baka, I'm not being incensitive or mean; I just don't know how to respond to the story too well. It was good..., but it didn't exactly...well, let's just say the most foreshadowing you had was in your preface (and that blood mana thing). I like it for a tragedy though.