| First Story
Story 8/10
originality 9/10
style 6/10
structured 4/10
Spelling/Grammer 7/10
Overall 7.5/10
Reviewers Comments
Great story. It was what you might call original, it was written fairly well, except at the end where everything seemed to happen in one paragraph where you weren't sure who was
Second story
Story 8/10
originality 9/10
style 7.5/10
structured 7/10
Spelling/Grammer 6/10
Overall 8.5/10
Reviewers Comments
I liked this. not to much wrong with it. |