[Emperor Pan I]

You said u made it realistic. I do not count a diablo game realistic. either you are actualy using diablo characters in a real world type setting, or people using a game, in between you have a confusing story that sounds stupid having "lingo."

You said it was a story about LOD, not about bnet, correct me if im wrong, but taht gives the impression that it is actualy a story written for the storyline of Diablo, not just a game between to bnet players. When i use chatting, i am not writting a story, i am merely reviewing, had i written a story i would not use words that do not fit.