| Story 8/10
originality 9/10
style 7/10
structured 7/10
Spelling/Grammer 8/10
Reviewers Comments:
Good story, obviously, it is based on your life, so the story doesn't realy matter. It would be nice to give more details. It is obviously original, as original as your life can be, im sure no one is going to put their life story. It is written well, nicely put in paragraphs. the general idea is easy to follow.
Spelling was good, grammer was a little better.
overall good job. |