| Story 7/10
originality 8/10
style 6/10
structured 7/10
Spelling/Grammer 5/10
Overall 7/10
Reviewers Comments
I found a couple errors, but is pretty easy to understand. Cool story, nice writting. cant wait to hear more.
Last edited by Emperor Pan I; 06-03-2003 at 06:06 AM.
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