| Re: A Goblin Tale (This is a very strange story)
Story 6/10
originality 9.5/10
style 5/10
structured 6/10
Spelling/Grammer 4/10
Overall 6/10
Reviewers Comments
Heh, nice story there, although it was a little confusin at times. ok maybe most of it was confusing. as for stories, it is nice to be clear about what is happening, and it is best not to jump around and keep to a subject.
Definately original, and the general writting was confusing. put together nice though. Spelling and grammer were a little off, but it was still a good read.
Last edited by Emperor Pan I; 06-03-2003 at 05:57 AM.
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