| i love the first one, the others are iffy, if your teacher is a female, go for the first one most deff.
second one, is about a ballerina?
third one, i like the third one also, these are actually good.
fourth, doesnt jump out at me.
fifth one a errror? "down the with the machine" down with the machine is fine, talking about how we are all sheep to society? i like that one also.
sixth, well.... no comment.
final, no comment.
whats the poem have to be about? a theme or something?
i have to get off, ill be on in... 7 hours when i wake up for school.
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i'm tired and cant think of really good titles sorry
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whoops, i thought you wanted crit.
Title one: Heavenly i guess.
Title two: Still Life
Title Three: The Kiss
Title Five: Drones/Machines
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