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AP · 04-02-2007, 11:01 PM

I have no titles. Help me think of some

Most of them seem really bad to me. If you can figure out some ways i can tweak it to make it better please share.

need feedback.

Fast, this stuff is like due tomorrow lol

1. Its a secks poem
2. I wrote this about a geisha figurine outside my room in a glass display.
3. Its a poem about seeking forigiveness
4. Its a "high" poem. It originated from some body movement (to help inspire creativty) we were doing. I tried to mix them both so i would look hXc, cuz all the cool kids smoke pot, ...yeah.
5. Its a commie poem! I like the theme but i think the structure can really improve like hell.
6. Filler. I really need help on this.
7. Winter/spring death/life

04-02-2007, 11:01 PM	#1 (permalink)
AP BattleForums Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Age: 17 Posts: 1,048	Rate my poems I have no titles. Help me think of some Most of them seem really bad to me. If you can figure out some ways i can tweak it to make it better please share. need feedback. Fast, this stuff is like due tomorrow lol 1. Its a secks poem 2. I wrote this about a geisha figurine outside my room in a glass display. 3. Its a poem about seeking forigiveness 4. Its a "high" poem. It originated from some body movement (to help inspire creativty) we were doing. I tried to mix them both so i would look hXc, cuz all the cool kids smoke pot, ...yeah. 5. Its a commie poem! I like the theme but i think the structure can really improve like hell. 6. Filler. I really need help on this. 7. Winter/spring death/life __________________ GET TO THE END OF THE SPOILER AND PM ME THE MSG FOR A PRIZE!! ROUND 3 BEGINS! 50 PRIZES! First claim and comply, first serve. <a href="http://www.easycounter.com/"> <img src="http://www.easycounter.com/counter.php?34545" border="0" alt="HTML Hit Counters"></a> <br> Last edited by AP; 04-03-2007 at 12:19 AM.