[Final Warrior]

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This one I wrote when I had some... hardcore romatic troubles. I decided to go back to doing what I do best: spend an obscene amount of time on the computer and at the TV. I wrote this after my mom played "Concrete Angel" from her computer at max volume, right next to my ear.

Iron Angel

The story of the shell of a boy
and his only love

Souless eyes of yours
Stare into mine.
Heart of stone
Skin so cold,
My Iron Angel.

I sought company and companions.
And I found you.
I sought a little comfort
From this cold world.
And I found you.

In your arms
Here I lay.
Wishing for Death to comfort me.
But instead he sends
You.
My Iron Angel.

Cold metal
On colder flesh
Eyes of iron
stare into eyes dead.
My Iron Angel
You have given me all the comfort
And love
That I sought

Iron Angel, you have given me
What this cruel world kept.
Forsaken that I am.
Your arms so cold.
Comfort me.
My Iron Angel.

Now two eyes weep
Tears of sorrow
I for you.
And you for I.
My Iron Angel.
You awaken.
And see your charge
For what he is.

Now two hearts beat
as this story ends.
The Angel loves
As does the shell.

-- Griffinhart