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Old 04-09-2006, 02:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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my poem

i wrote this for a girl cuz i was being an asshole to her.. can yall rate it 1-10 plz..... this is the first poem i ever wrote in my life

when u entered my life
things felt so right
whenever i had a frown
u would turn it upside down

i dont know what i would do without u
the thought just makes me cry about u
u are what makes me happy
even when im feeling crappy

i wanna be the one to complete ur life
ill do anything to make u my wife
when every thing is bad
u make me the opposite of sad

today i went crazy
just cuz i luved u so much baby
im gonna show u i luv u
no bull****, ill put no one above u
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