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Originally Posted by CelestialBadger Since my post was moved, I'd like to point out once againt that these poems are fairly awful. A brief overview: free verse is poetry that does not rhyme and does not have meter. Blank verse is poetry that does not rhyme but does have meter. There is no type of poetry that rhymes but does not have meter. This is the type of attempted poetry that is written by hormone driven teenagers. |
I would have to agree with CB... although it is nice that you are motivated to write poetry, Frank, there is a reason that certain forms of poetry have come to be accepted as the best for conveyance.
I can understand that you want to point out incompetency, CB, but at the same time, who gives a damn.
That being said, I am going to write an emo haiku, in Japanese roumaji:
Kuroi kokoro
Niko niko kanashii
Shi ga hoshii ne
Translation:
Black heart
Smile, sad
Death is desirable, isn't it?
Hurray for emo haikus.