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This is the type of attempted poetry that is written by hormone driven teenagers.
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That being said though, the unmetred rhyming lines are meant to give the impression of an inept loser of a man who has no idea how to write a love song!
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Wow. I must say, excellent point. Flaming is the reason many posts have been removed from this thread! I will not tolerate such things! I do read this forum. I just haven't had much inspiration to post. Whatever the case, Raya is very much correct.
There are many forms of poetry. If you don't like it, you needn't read it. You have every right to post your opinions of one's writing, but it should remain as constructive as possible.
This post is both a formal and a final warning. Flaming is not allowed in any forum outside the Asylum.
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My poem wasn't directly flaming. It was satire. I wrote it because that's how I felt and I'd appreciate it if you moved it back. I can't even read it anymore since you moved it to staff. Way to rob a man of his art, the only thing that he has left in his sad and lonely existence.