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Old 02-28-2005, 02:48 PM   #92 (permalink)
Dhrenzen
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(( I'll take the plot development with rice, and an extra side of Battle scene, extra bloody. ))

Suddenly, Gunshots sounded out, answered by more gunshots. "What the(deleted explitive) is going on?" shouted Damien. "The sounds came from the southern post. There is much movement there usually."

The group traveled over to the gate and peered out. There were about 45 enemy soldiers, and 20 underground fighters. "They'll get killed, the odds are against them! We have to help!" shouted Damien. Judging by the other's silence, he assumed they agreed. "LET'S GO!!!!!" he shouted as he ran at the enemies.

(( These guys are better than cops, they are actual soldiers. It won't be as easy as killing the cops. One of you may go first. ))
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