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Old 02-16-2005, 02:13 AM   #8 (permalink)
Magikarp
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Most of the time, I give good reviews. In fact, I generally give some of the longest replies. But that story.. it doesn't even deserve to exist. Like l33t on3 said, it's a friggin' paragraph. If anything, bam, you should toss this thread.

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Originally Posted by S.S. Trunks
I felt around
First read as "I felt aroused."

And if this is some lame attempt to describe a DBZ scene.. stop. Do it for the children .
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